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All Comments on 'Lemonade (The Apology)'

by cocodolce

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
*****

Interesting.

Five.

NeverWinterNiteNeverWinterNitealmost 13 years ago

I enjoyed reading your story. :)

You're a wonderful writer.

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127almost 13 years ago
This was so wonderful & different

Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Great story babe! You're very talented! You had me locked in from the start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Pure tease. . .

Fast, funny, clever: the deceptive lightness of touch actually masks a carefully thought-out narrative construction. As one writer / ex-editor to another. . . well done, cocodolce. Made my day!

BamarayBamarayabout 12 years ago
Nice!!

Great story!! Sure got a rise outta me!!!

klippertklippertabout 12 years ago
HOT...I luv it

You have a special way with words for sure....I like the 'Apology'..... the cock sucking description was hot....hope she sucks and licks more for attention....

lowflykiwilowflykiwiabout 12 years ago
Hot story

Well written and hot to boot.

datnigdatnigabout 12 years ago

Great story and well writen. Will it be a part II

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