All Comments on 'I Can Be A Freak'

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Cinndney25Cinndney25almost 13 years ago
Love it!!!

Cant wait for you to update!!!

ArieluArielualmost 13 years ago
Loving it

Waiting in antcipation

honeybreehoneybreealmost 13 years ago
lol this was cute...

I can't wait to see how this story plays out Mel and Trina are a trip...aww I miss Martin now

lili82lili82almost 13 years ago
"Ride or die, Ella; ride or die!"

Lmao, yeah, they're like Pam and Gina, but Mel reminds me of a young Medea more than Pam! Or of my bff! Loved it, can't wait for more because I haven't laughed like I did reading this in a while!

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127almost 13 years ago
Hell yeah Taser his ass!

Okie I can't wait til Taken is back but, I'm loving this new story.... I'm glad this new story popped in your head...Loving it. 5 stars!

bluebrowneyesbluebrowneyesalmost 13 years ago
Where is TAKEN?? Did Someone RUN off w/ Your Muse or Mojo?

I know you like most of us are EXTREMELY BUSY! PLEASE finish Taken!! I didn't even bother to read "I Can Be A FREAK" I was so DISAPPOINTED it was not TAKEN when I saw your name. It has been MONTHS now!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
*****

Five.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Can't wait to read the rest. Well written, a movie playing in my head

NightpleasureNightpleasurealmost 13 years ago

This was a great start. next chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great!

Minus the errors (which you already acknowledged) this is great...intrigued by the characters and the backstory

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
i wish

i wish i dont love ur works so i wont be addicted with it. . .hufh another waiting - n

hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyalmost 13 years ago
Damn!!

I sat here howling my ass off at this story, please please

you have to update this one and soon. I could care less about the errors this is a good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
yay freak

Ok so I have liked your other stories,but I got to say I am looking forward to where this one is going. Please hurry with more longer chapters.

verbicideverbicideover 12 years ago
Niiiiicce!

Okay, we can skip the blah, blah, blah about editing and spelling and get right to the congratulating. Nicely written. the story has a conversational, confessional style which I found enthralling. It was also quite funny. Needless to say (but I'm going to say it anyway), I look forward to more.

trupactrupacover 12 years ago
HOOOOOOT

hurry up soon.

IndianPrincess2IndianPrincess2over 12 years ago
ok

Just found this story and its getting good so I hope you will update it soon thanks!!

aggie35aggie35over 12 years ago
Love It....

I love all of your stories!! This one reminds me of my sister and I lol I'm really excited to see where this one goes so please update it soon and continue with the good work :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i continue to check back

Please update this story soon. : )

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Down low closet freak.............a bad thing

Hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm librarian as a closet freak...........did you not just call me out???

Please continue the tale.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Please work on this one

Despite the technical rough patches; story is alright.

When Nick was remembering his night with Trina, Carlos Santana's song "Black Magic Woman" was playing loudly in my mind...............oh yeah. By all means finish this one. I can feel Nick strumming Trina like Carlos strummed his guitar playing that song. Think I'm going to listen to it now....such a sexy tune.

peekingduckpeekingduckover 12 years ago
Okay girlie

One of these stories should be updated soon. Pretty please.

YannesYannesover 12 years ago

peeking ducks right i just love all yah stories . . .so with that an a cherry ontop please add more soon

SunKisstSunKisstalmost 12 years ago

Are u just gonna leave it hanging there?

Bizzy_BishBizzy_Bishalmost 12 years ago
Love it!

I really would like to see where this goes, but it looks as if you're not going any further! Great teaser, though!

-Bizzy

StaggeredHeartsStaggeredHeartsover 11 years ago
More please

Waiting for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This was too funny. The description of dude getting tasered was the best. And Trina's night with Nick (from his POV) was hot. -DC

tuty0201tuty0201over 11 years ago

More. Please finish the story

mrskelleymrskelleyover 11 years ago
Please finish!

More please!!!!!!

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertover 11 years ago

Lmao! This was indeed a," Gina& Shananay" moment..Mel is more liken to Martin female alter ego Shanaynay. Now with a rap sheet for assault/ battery and kidnapping or at the very lease unlawful imprisonment where does this duo go from here. Nick's (pov) on his night shared with Trin was hot. The scene with Jamal torture albeit abit over the top was funny as hell, this story is oto a roaring start. I can only imagine the writer's block you may be experiencing. I earnestly believe the characters from ,Taken as well as this offering are waiting on you. I Can be a Freak, is funny and I really hope that once life settles for you a bit you will continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Mmm mmmm good...

Ok seriously I have never commented on a story but this story is just too good. When I realized that there isn't another part I was like one of those characters in the movies who gets down on their knees and screams 'NOOOO!' I couldn't help but smile and laugh while reading this story. I will be waiting for the next part. BTW Great Job!

SultryRose321SultryRose321over 10 years ago
Loving it

I really like this story please,please continue!!

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 9 years ago
i really like this

Please do finish omg Nick and Trina yes and maybe even Wade and Melinda!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Ooooooo

Yes please do continue

Allegedly_LiterateAllegedly_Literatealmost 3 years ago

Why do writers start stories and not complete them? It's awfully frustrating. I get writers block but most incomplete stories have been years since first chapter was written. J, if you post elsewhere please let us know. Thanks

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