All Comments on 'Daddy's Dirty Buttslut Act 01'

You're delivering on what you promised, which is good. I'd ask you to go light on the actual fecal matter, but you're the author so do what you will. Either way, write more.

I found this story filthy and without any redeeming qualities. That's probably why I loved it, more please.

You, you, you, you, you, you, you. Geez. Writing a story that way really sucks.

Um, yes, GREAT!!

I agree with your characters. I hate stories where they get enemas before anal sex. What them to fuck her dirty ass then have her clean off the shitty dick with her mouth.

Thank you for your positive comments and feedback, I love to receive them!

This is one of the best taboo stories I ever read. The detailed description of the girl made her seem very sexy. The father's reaction to his daughter and their conversation are both sexy and tantilizing without giving away too much. Can't wait to read the other parts.

I'm really glad you like it, and I hope you enjoy the other parts too!

Sucks, an 8 year old could write something more believable.

It's supposed to be believable? Since when?

This story isnt that great, i mean like i read better omes

its obviously cators to certain fetishes, which it clearly stated at the begining. i liked it. found act 6 first and started here.

I liked this story very much :)

I like the story idea, but the narrative style ruins it for me, the present style of narrative is never good imo, though i am sure others may enjoy it

You seem to be aiming at literary recreation of the POV-style which is so pouplar in porn videos, it will surely work for a lot of people, for me though, i gave up after reading half of part 1(this part)

Hopefully you will write something for us who like more conventional narrative styles in future :)

Keep narratives to a minimum. Long narratives tend to be passed by.

It is the explicit dialogue that is the more sensual and dynamic.

The more kinky the fetish, the better.

The story premise is good.

Try writing some mother/son stories, also.

Nice job man, thank you for this masterpiece.

That slut needs every inch of her anal love tunnel stretched and ripped by my fat cock. I need to hear her screams. Tat would make me CUM so hard!. OH GOD YES!!@

Thank you I have a reaaally good time and one of my favorite story of all time