All Comments on 'Oh, Library Boy!'

by nymphobrainiac

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BenLongBenLongalmost 13 years ago
nice fantasies

liked them both! Can't wait for more.

Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 13 years ago
A finely-written tale.

Thank you. You may like some of my stories.

MizTMizTalmost 13 years ago
Nice Quicky

I really enjoy reading a hot quicky. By quicky I mean no more than one page in length. You somehow managed to describe two character and give some really great action in not a whole lot of words. Congrats because that's not easy to do. Also congrats on the fact that this is one of two storys that make up your first posting on Lit. I look forward to reading more of your works.

HeadguyHeadguyalmost 13 years ago
Delicious!

Loved the story: its shortness, its sly humor, its reference to Edna St Vincent Millay (known for burning her candle at both ends :-) ). Keep up the nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
a smile

Loved the way you developed her character at the start - really set the story up so beautifully. Made me smile when she teased him and yet his complex response added to the humour.

Auld_HenryAuld_Henryover 12 years ago
Brillant,

Ho yes, a brillant piece of writting,

Look forward to reading many more of your submissions.

heatherredheatherredover 12 years ago
Nice!

I need to make a run to the Library today ;)

Auld_HenryAuld_Henryover 12 years ago
I was hot ....

I lived every moment of this exciting story,

worried that all would be discovered and then I would be humiliated.

jonmartin22jonmartin22over 12 years ago
nice!

Quick and to the point, I like the way you controlled the speed of reading as the passion built.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Nice buildup ...and delivery!

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