All Comments on 'Let's Do Lunch'

Pretty Fly has been 1 of my faves for like ever!! it's the 1st i ever saved 2 faves! so happy u continued!! i love these 2 characters & adding Pres & his voyeurism was a nice sexy twist! thank u & hope 2 read more from u!

that Nicollette and Michael will be together as a couple getting married with Mr. Preston and his weird way of thinking falls deeply in love with his hooker that he tries to make look like Nicci as he has sex with her and shows it to Michael.

If he is a friend, he definitely does not need Any enemies!!!

You are a good writer. Keep up the good work.

This is an amazing story. I really want to know what happens next. Does Preston try to break them up? Does Nicc get her man? Its been a year, how much longer :)

The comment in the story made by Preston about black women being "good enough to bed, but not wed" is an statement reeking of an elemental social perception still held by some white men. Even in this day and age it is a struggle. We have exceptional models in Mrs. Obama, Marion Wright Edelman, B. Smith....EXCEPTIONAL sistahs to name a few and yet this attitude is STILL malignantly present. It is thinly veneered, but an entity... a presence on the American social scene. It is the 21st century and we still have to fight a master/slave mentality on so many levels. It is a hard fight, but one I will fight to knock down every time I see it rear its ugly head!!!!! See the WOMAN as such; not as an easily disrespected, discounted and readily dismissed partner because she is black.

Ok you promised not to make us wait 10 years for Prestons story and would like more on Nicci and Mike