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Holiday Surprise

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/19/11

FANTASTIC...just too short!

Your story could easily be expanded to 2-page length. Maybe extend the cleaning dick-lick into a proper blowjob...?

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by Anonymous07/19/11

Except

Why would she want another man to be the first when she is about to be married? Too illogical to believe.

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by Anonymous07/19/11

"Cum gushed from her cunt in spurts"

You are going to be very disappointed when you find out in real life that it doesn't.

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