All Comments on 'Cuff Her'

by KAnneMeinel

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Lacklustre ending

I admire a lot of your stories, but this one was a bit flat.

It read like a newspaper report. The ending seemed silly, it didn't give the story a raison d'être; some zing. It needed a line like 'her husbands body was later identified from dental records in the boot of his burned-out Mercedes' or 'Her creditors were said to be quite distraught.'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
BARF!

That about covers it.

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