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Maid for a Good Time

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by Anonymous07/26/11

Great Start

It's a great start, but you have to continue the story

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by Anonymous07/26/11

more

a great start indeed; lets see more; is there a gardner?

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by Anonymous07/26/11

Just a question.

Are all of them women?

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by Anonymous07/27/11

Why would the wife go to the trouble of writing a several-page note, rather than just say "Come upstairs as fast as possible."?
The story was nicely written and erotic, but the idea of the long note should be dropped.

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by Anonymous08/25/13

I loved it! The suspense of reading the letter was wonderful. The details of the story were very visual. Thanks!

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