It's a great start, but you have to continue the story
a great start indeed; lets see more; is there a gardner?
Are all of them women?
Why would the wife go to the trouble of writing a several-page note, rather than just say "Come upstairs as fast as possible."?
The story was nicely written and erotic, but the idea of the long note should be dropped.
I loved it! The suspense of reading the letter was wonderful. The details of the story were very visual. Thanks!
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