by KimberlyFitz
I wish I had a sister like that.....minus the ball crushing that is.
way to unrealistic for me noone goes from being that mad at someone to loving them in hours in this case probably never especially since it has been going on for years.
A good start but went a bit too far. You have good insight and can easily set up a real situation. Be observant and the situation will develop.
she stomps on the guys nuts and the mom doesn't rush him to the hdoctor or hospital and doesn't punish the daughter total bullshit. they hate each other and always fight yet we are suposed to believe that suddenly they forget and love each other bullshit no way in hell he would forgive her. no guy that had his balls stomped on is going to be able to fuck that day lucky if he can in two or three days again bullshit. do some research and then do a rewrite using a good editor. the brother sounds about twelve not the needed eighteenbest to delete this before you get banned for posting underage sex
Are you trying to add realism or induce nausea?
You are a good writer and it made me hard. Good for you, good for me. Please write some more. Thank you.
to read a story written by a woman gives a better perspective, thanks
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