All Comments on 'Slightly, Once Ch. 02'

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a great story of young love. I can envision myself in the story. I guess it helps that my name is David

I have been reading erotica for many years and never have had the pleasure of reading such a well thought out and written story both Chapters one and two. The author has taken the time to not only use words and phrases correctly, but the tense of verbs and subjects even agree. And one of the greatest compliments, the spelling so far has been accurate and as such does not detract from the story as so many sloppily written pieces tend to do.

All in all, thank you.

Is there not a single story on this site where a guy doesn't go down on a girl after he came inside her? I have no interest in reading about a guy eating his own cum.

Sweet, fun, sexy! I love this couple!!!

This well-written sequel is flawed only by its brevity; everything in the story here is thoughtfully conceived, but rushed, including the all-too-brief love scene.