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Slightly, Once Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/31/11

Please continue this story!!

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by Anonymous08/03/11

Beautiful Story

This story has such beautiful elements that I think many can recall their first love and emote with the characters described here. Wonderful!

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by talldarkfellow06/18/13

What a line!

Your description of the male emotional range was so perfect, I laughed out loud. The story was very good, but two things are nagging at my very overactive imagination.
First: How is a 18-year-old girl in 1972 not getting pregnant after all this non-prophylactic copulation over a period of months? Who outside of liberal college professors and middle-aged hookers were giving their teen girls the pill back then?
Second, I could see her father coming to terms with what he assumes his daughter is doing with another high school kid, but being happy about it strains credibility.
Otherwise, I like your narrator and Kim a lot.

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