by katienight
This story was very nice! I'm incredibly excited to find out who it really was that went down on Alison. Keep writing!
I think you should add story line and expound on this story i would like to know who the mystery girl is and see how katie racts to all this. You are very good in my oppion and I would love to see more for alison and katie.
I believe you could have extended on what happed, maybe in the end it happens again and Alison finds out who it is?
Gahh, i want more parts!! these are my shizz.. That was incredible- the story of her many admirers, people wanting her... there just was a lack of description of how this person differed from katie's smell, taste, etc. coz i actually looked for that (but was given once near the ending).