All Comments on 'Helpless Sins'

What an amazing story. I myself do believe the possiblity of incest romance and as long as your consenting adults, it's no one else's business what you do go for it. I for one fully support it.

For your sake I hope thais beautiful love story actually happened. A fabulous experience, well described!

I hope you'll continue this as a series. There's lots of potential. Good job.

Great job! Any chance that it will be continued? If so any chance Mom can wear lingerie/heels for son? Wonderful story looking forward to more.

That was great! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Keep writing. You obviously have the talent for it.

One of the hottest stories I have read;Please continue and if it's real God Bless. There is no greater love

I think you captured the essence of a mother's desire for her son as well as anyone ever, Your writing about the fulfillment of the desire was wonderfully erotic. I hope you continue the great writing.

Like it so far...risks have consequences, Mom should end up knocked-up.

That was one of the hottest reads ever. I loved the buildup and the interaction between char and sam. I would love to read more and hope that you're interested in continuing it

A very tender and passionate story, filled with love and lust as all good love stories should be! Your writing is exquisite - a lovely ability to put your reader right there at the scene. Thank you for favoring us with your story!

Wonderful build up... The anticipation is enough to send you over the edge. Wonderful

Well done, Charlene. I hope we hear more soon about where this relationship has gone and is going.

" We tasted good ", was all I nedded

Hi everyone. Thanks to your support and feedback, Helpless Sins pt.2 is submitted and awaiting approval. I hope you all enjoy it. This story means a lot to me so all manner of feedback is welcome. Love and dirty thoughts to all of you.

Well thought out & highly readable.

Those who have said that you are a good writer clearly recognise class when they see it - and I am no exception! I don't know how I missed this story. I am reading it to acquaint myself with the original story, prior to reading chapter 2. If the second chapter is as good as this one, I will certainly be 'favouriting' both author and story.

5/5 (but worthy of a 10).

I am quite surprised at your writing skills as this is your first attempt. The build up was absolutely prefect as other stories just jump into the sex. The build up is what makes this so hot.

Your a great writer with good story telling skills. Keep it up!

The build up really made the story come alive. It is more real when shown as a hard decision to take the plunge rather than the old jump on each other story. Believe me....wink

Well written and oh so sweet. I like the thought that she may become pregnant by her son,it makes he coupling even more taboo.

Now that we know the beginning,please let us know the rest of the story, of how they interacted with each other after becoming lovers.

Thanks for the read

If its real I would wish that I was your son

Very good story, well written and incredibly hot.

I especially liked her friend phone-sexing her to orgasm.

Very well done.

brilliant hot horny story. out standing story brilliant writing. well if before you didn't write any thing you made your make now do keep them cumming.

You write beautifully...and full of lust. One of the best I've ever read. Thank you!

Very good writing :)

Loved the story and it is very well written. I'm sure many loving parents have thought about this very same thing, and kids too, I did. Most don't pull the trigger though, taboo is a very powerful force still today, even when both partners would consent.

such an erotic story, you had my hand in my panties! love it!

i stayed hard and harder the whole srory stroking my cock.

That was HOT..........!!

One reader commented wisely that many proud "parents may have wanted to do the same thing" while the cultural taboos hold them back. I personally know of one mother who 'may' have actually followed similar actions on the proverbial road trip to 'seek out the right college' for her son. Never any admission of the side trips along the way but both returned home a lot closer. Twenty years later, neither appears worse for their 'adventure' - her marriage continues strong ... and he married a strong, loving woman just like his mother. Your story comes across true to your opening paragraph - caring and affectionate; nothing dirty, slutty or porn-like. Good writing.

I just found you, and, like your son, want and will appreciate more, much more. Oh, Thank You!

Incredible story. I loved every part of it and found it very arousing. If it is true your son is one very lucky guy. The whole thing done lovingly and not perverted at all. My Aunt was my first ata young age and she taught me so much. It too was very loving and felt so normal.We continued for many years and I owe her so much. Cherish what you have.

Larry

One of the best stories I have read recently. When a writer writes from there heart the story just finds a way of telling itself!

Don't ever stop.

An absolutely amazing story. Both extremely hot and very romantic. The way you wrote the scenes was certainly awesome. Now, the only thing that could make it even better would be a spin off story relating Sam's story with her son Ben at home. She is such a funny character and she certainly has issues to deal with too. It would be so hot to have her getting into a relationship with her son too. Then both friends could really share the details with each other in the great dialogues you craft. I'm looking forward to that or any new story you decide to write (hopefully another mom/son one, my favorites). Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work, charlene_silvermist. 5 stars, favorited author and favorited story. ^__^

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It is a sexy, fun romp. It is also well written, though, like most Literotica stories, it could use a proof reader to clean up some minor gaffs. My only real criticism is that it is a bit overly wrought in places (e.g. "devilish tongues and sinfull lips") which only distracts the reader from the narrative. Still, it goes way beyond the typical Xs and Os of the sex act to capture some real intensity.

I really enjoyed the vivid descriptions of her emotions as shock, arousal, shame, guilt, lust and finally acceptance ran wild inside of her soul. There were a few wrong words, but they were easy to overlook since the story seemed to bleed from the heart of the writer. I'm looking forward to the next 3 chapters and although I'm fairly sure how it all end, it IS a delicate beautiful lusty romance. Whew!

Creative new use of an old taboo...mother and son erotic fantasy. Loved it!

Told as only a woman and mother could tell. This has to be the best of mother-son incest. I know were I a younger man I wouldn't be able to contain the need to masturbate and shoot my cum out thinking of the two of you fucking so passionately. Thankfully, there's more to read!!

from a mom's perspective are by far the type of thing I like the most, but in the back of my mind I can't help but wonder if it's really some dude that set up an account pretending to be female as one often sees them saying in their Bio stuff like "I only want to correspond with other moms and women ..." as then they can jack-off when "moms" (lol) write back playing the same game. And while I suspect that that sort of thing happens a lot, no doubt there indeed are actual moms ... but it's just difficult to know who's legit and who is bogus as ... dudes pursue their psychological gratification via deceit.

This story's genre is the total best of my inclinations to reading, loving and having experienced the fortune's, and along the way, some longing heartaches of incestual love, as between myself and my daughter's love. Being a male, and as with the majority of males, my most favorite of incestual love relations is mother and son. As the love's of a mother and son for each other, it is my firmest belief there is no love as deep, as caring and emotional, as convincing and honest, as heart-warming and celestial as the mother's love for her son, and vice versa. Why is the mother's love for her child(ren) so deep and so unadulteratingly pure and sincere? The mother was bred with the seed, bore, nurtured, even sometimes condoned, but certainly reared their offspring, certainly more so than than any human in the child's life and influence, and for the first nine-months of the child's life--nine months of being as one entity, one mind, one soul and one spirit. Is there any question as to which parent would ever have so much love for that child once it is "spanked" into a life of its own? Certainly, no one! No one but their Queen/Mother!

The male can know somewhat of the mother and son incestual feelings because they are/were male-teens and male-adolescents while being borne for nine-months and reared by the most beautiful woman/female in their maturing minds and eyes--the Queen of their kingdom, their Mother! And I as a father have some knowledge of the depth of that feeling and caring, by and between my daughter and myself, I also during my teen and adolescent years had a mother that I loved (unfortunately, not incestually) and honored and respected until her death almost 14 years ago. Son's are leary and reluctant to venture into a deep relationship with older female family members--especially their mother--because the son is not wise to the misfortune's the future can bring them, in any of their endeavors, even non-sexual, and the son therefore relies on their parent, in particular their mother for that guidance, even if that guidance brings them into a sexual relationship and affair with Mother/Queen; the son trusts and respects their mother's decisions--explicitedly!

Enough of my philosophizing.

This story is so graciously written, even into and through the limited foreplay, and their--mother and son--first ever climax together, their exhaustion and sensual carressing while extending their exhausted bodies and minds into sleep!

Being an exhaustive reader of many years, I can honestly say this writer's first entry of a story, particularly in my most-favorite genre of mother and son incest, and in the arena of much of my reading, Literotica, it is absolutely an endeavor of heavenly proportions! I won't and with this story I will not mention nor dwell on any missteps and/or errors of penmanship/typing--it's as rediculous as a grain of sand in the living room carpet!

What IS important to this story is the reader, all reader's, can enjoy with total satisfaction, and for myself, with as much appreciation and admiration for a great and compelling story for this composer's first stanze of musical incest. Enjoy it. Breath it. Honor it. Devour it. Praise it. And most of all appreciate it and the opportunity that we've all had access to read it! A magnificent job, First Time Literature Creator!!

P.S. Accept my apology for getting carried away with my adolations and accolades!

What a massive turn-on to read from a woman's perspective the emotions and feelings and conflicting urges she experienced. I hope you write much more erotic adventures for us to read. You are an incredibly talented and creative writer...please don't stop with this series,,,please!

loved it-hot sex and love between these two-esp. when they both learn how much they want each other and it's ok- thanks

The phone sex. The caught and being caught, Thanks for not including the actual size as it leaves it to the reader to imagine. Oh I imagined how big! ;)

Beautifully written & paced. The emotions were there in full force for all to see.

Thank you for this story. I hope se read MANY more from you.

It makes me thrill when you write about the mom who forgot about birth control.

Amazingly hot...loved hearing about her struggle and subsequent surrender. I think it's beautiful

loved the story from a womans point of view

you describe sex so good

thank you for a great orgasm!!!

5 STARS IS NOT ENOUGH. THIS DESERVES 10 STARS!

The mother should not have worried about any girl(s) her son has had. No young girl stands a chance against a honest, mature woman who has taken care of herself. No girl has the experience, trust, and arousal that a mother offers in a sexual relationship with her son. Both mother and son realize the safety, security and unconditional love they freely offer each other. Both want to please the other. Having has sexual relations, they now face the challenage of accepting each others equal human beings. As one who has no problem with mutually consensual incest in real life, this is a tender love story between a mother and son who ae both self-aware, have solid egos, are psychologically and emotionally mature. 5 star chapter.