All Comments on 'Reborn Ch. 02'

This story was HOT! I can't wait to see what Mistress will be doing to Bella.

While I don't mind suspending disbelief when the premise of story rests solely on major leaps in techno-gynological innovation (after all, hope springs eternal) this one lacked sufficient detail about the transformation to satisfy curiosity and stoke the readers imagination.

OTOH, the image of 16" dicks with monstrous bazooms (gravity-defying disclaimers notwithstanding) has always been a complete turnoff. Would have been nice had the prologue forewarned readers that the story involved a hedonistic scenario filled with brazillian shemales.

This was 10 minutes I'll never get back.

MOAR!

Very well written story. Can't wait for chapter 3 !

Please write more dmitrys fan fics