by Chiara23
Good story. Loved the build up to the mind blowing conclusion. First Time stories are my favorite. Hope you write more in the future. Well done!
love the story that included sex, wholesome sex between two consenting adults, in contrast to stories of sex, with an excuse for the sex wrapped around it, like a taco shell.
I'm sorry but you're story didn't make sense in the begining of it. Why on Earth would the parents get them a hotel room, put a card in her purse that she never saw all night and then leave them another note that not only they got them room service but also a box of condoms from the parents and sister? Yeah... It seemed like you were grasping at straws to get them to a point where they could have sex.
Definitely the sweetest thing I have read in years. Sorry I just can not come up with a better description. This was how it always should be.
It's not often you see the viewpoint of those without voice in a sexy and thoughtful way. I found myself (even as a guy) identifying with Emily more than Matt, as she discovers her own womanhood in this encounter. --EagerLicker72
Decent story, but seems as though you may not really know much about deafness. I'll save you from the novel I could write and just say 2 things: 1)Hard of hearing, not hearing impaired. 2)Not all deaf people want cochlear implants.
Thank you for this and your many other wonderful stories. I read this one and "It Started In A Cabin" aloud to my partially-sighted wife. We both smiled as we thought how like Matt and Emily we once were although, after 41 years together we now more closely resemble George and Rose.
Your stories are a delight to read, being carefully edited and virtually free of the mis-spellings, misuses and grammatical errors that are so distracting in many submissions here. You have put the literate into Literotica!
I have read literally thousands of books by hundreds of authors, both famous and obscure, and your efforts rank with the best of them in any genre. Your characters are well developed, your plots well crafted.
Wifey and I are anxiously awaiting chapter 3 of the Cabin series.
fantastic story. please add three more tags to this story : deaf, mute, sign language.
I really enjoyed reading, you have created a verry believable romance, at one point there were tears in my eyes. You have shown that people with a disability can still be beautifull and that they can find love.
Thankyou
Fantastic!!
Since I've lost my hearing (side effect of work) I've been wondering if anyone would ever post a story about deafness, mute or deaf/mute person