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Slightly, Once Ch. 05

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by Anonymous08/03/11

Wonderful Story

The author takes us from meeting in high school, to dating, to making love, to truly caring for each other, to the usual end of high school relationships - the college decision. Here,the characters may go on to college together. I would suggest that more than one more chapter is needed to fully explore these two wonderful characters. Please go on with the story. It is beautifully told

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