All Comments on 'Hot & Sticky'

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SharpguySharpguyover 12 years ago
Well done...

Nice tale...I hope you share a few more sexy episodes with this couple.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
scorching-hot AND romantic, wow!

What a wonderful story. Many thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Sexy sweet!

Good detail and nice twist at the end.

garthburgandygarthburgandyover 9 years ago
My lover my lover my lover...

I really wanted to love this story but everytimw I read "my lover" after the first few uses it made me cringe. There are hundreds of synonyms to use! I'm not saying it takes away from the story necessarily, but using synonyms would give your story a more fluid and realistic feel.

JACKBETHJACKBETH10 months ago

Wow. Very good- with a twist in the tail(pun intended)

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