by centrum1000
Really good writing style, and story too. But the end was abrupt and lackluster. He should've helped his mom get her hand out, then plundered her exquisite body more, since it seemed obvious she would've been open to more sex with her son. 4 out of 5.
to being rape! I know, I know that she sounded like she was willing but only after he managed to get her turned on. He still forced himself onto her, in my opinion. I usually like mother/son incest, but not this theme.
great story..I love how he left her there half naked and freshly fucked.
Why?
nooooo! he should not leave her like that. and dont you leave such a good start.... cuntinyou.
Stupidest ending imaginable.
Worst case scenario:- Mother loses her hand.
Best case scenario:- Father finds her like that and cuts the balls off his fucking sadistic moron of a son.
Either way it firmly slams the door on any possibility of a sequel, which is something the readers can be thankful for.
I really pity the poor sick deadshit fuckwit who dreamed this one up.
i enjoyed the story....until the ending. That ending flat out sucked.
Story started with a bit of promise but eventually the protagonist, as well as the writer, showed true colors...
But that ending is one of the more idiotic ones I've ever read -- anywhere.
You had the makings of a fairly good story, but the end sucked and that killed it all!!!!!!!
i thot your ending was planned and well thought out. i think its more realistic then them "finding out they're both secretly in love withh eachother and are soul mates" bullshit. cuz thats so pathetic. This one made me laugh
This author has produced quite a few torrid Mom-son tales in the past: "Son's Halloween Party", "New Year's Eve Seduction", and "Valentine's Date With Mom", and a couple sequels. He also recently submitted "Riding on Son's Lap" which, although very closely akin to at least 3 other similar stories, was a fairly good variation on that particular theme. Thus, I'm inclined to cut him a little slack on this latest submission.
That doesn't, however, mean that I liked or enjoyed the tale. To be honest, this is one of those times where I wish that Literotica allowed "0" (zero) or negative numbers to be used in rating a story.
The premise - Mom's wrist caught in garbage disposal when her bracelet gets snagged - is ludicrous from the outset, to any guy who's ever had to perform maintenance at the kitchen sink. There's simply nothing for the average bracelet to get caught on, in the mouth of the disposal. Plus, if the Mom was any woman of average intelligence, she'd have removed the bracelet before attempting to retrieve her wedding ring!
Further: If you actually READ the story, paying just the tiniest bit of attention to the whole laughable scene with the oil, it's obvious that Centrum1000 didn't take much time to picture the scene in his mind before engaging the keyboard. The sheer "physics" of the scene don't work out the way he describes, if you'd actually "try this at home".
Finally, the primary character (the son) is an absolute ass! Once he's got her hot enough to overcome the usual set of objections, she seems to really get into the incestuous sex with her son. In fact, it's probable, judging by her reaction to the whole thing, that she'd probably want to continue this new aspect of her relationship with her son. Right up to the point where he walks away like the uncouth bastard he really is, leaving her standing there with her hand still caught in the disposal.
If Centrum hadn't been in the midst of a terrible case of "writer's slump", he'd no doubt have worked the scene in such a way that the son's body-contact with Mom, while he worked at actually freeing her hand from the disposal, got her so hot and bothered that there would have been only one method of reward on her mind for her darling rescuer - and it would have consumed a lot more "quality time" than the three-minute "quickie" the son actually got out of this incident.
I'd rate this one at about a minus-five!
. . . in which the father horsewhips his son and throws him out with the trash.
Story is a huge disappointment and one star is too high a rating. With no backstory to explain why the son would treat his mother like that, he just comes off as an asswipe. Totally killed the eroticism of the story unless your into dedgradation and humiliation.
ok i get the son coming home drunk and getting turned on by his mom ass, but this was more of a rape scene. and for him to treat his mom like a slut by leaving her there is just bullshit.now mo can tell the dad she was molested by the son so he gets the ass whoopin he deserves. for a normally great writer this was a total disgrace.
Perfect. More of this type of story would be great. You are one of the best writers here.Thanks.
all of you who post hateful comments anonymously go buy yourself a pair of balls for xmas and log into your account and then post ... you pussies ... all that 'internet courage' under the anonymous name ... i mean for god's sake, you don't have the balls to post under an account even ... how much more cowardly could you get?
for the author, good story ... good build up i thought but a little quick ending ;) but he was worked up so maybe he couldn't help it ;) good job :)
Must be annoying when a bunch of anonymous individuals slag off about your work. I thought this was a great 5 rated story until the last couple of lines; but it still deserves a 4.
Could I suggest a further scenario. Son thinks about what he's done and returns to mum and offers to get her free for ongoing sex. Father now awake hears this and comes into the kitchen. One of your anonymous commentators suggested that the father should horsewhip the son and throw him out with the trash. Why not turn that on its head; the father tries to attack the son, but in turn he beats the father, ties him up and forces him to watch as son screws mum. Setting for a nice little cuckold tale, even potential sissification.
I'd also like to thanks you because in two of your stories, Auction Block and Valentine's Day, you gave me a clue for the ending of a story that I've become stuck on - suppressed desire for domination set free.
Thanks for this story, it has great potential.
Just wanted to add a couple of points. IMHO, the ending tends to leave everybody up in the air; the mother, the son and the readers.
Perhaps, if the son were to return later, he could bring his camera and get some compromising pictures of mum to use for blackmail - and more sex!
For all of the Dumb Shits here bitching about the anon posters lets all post our real names. As far as the ending goes, The son was a ass that needs to be beaten to with in a inch of his life.
Pretty Ruthless. I mean a hand stuck like and all the effing going on and then not even helping clean up and leaving the poor woman in the dark in that awkward posture. Too Cruel. Didn't seem Mother-Son at all. More like homeless guy and poor Milf whos stuck. Ending too ruthless. and no Im not some feminist woman lol. Im a dude saying this.
The ending is too nasty. Its cruel and misogynistic. Its a shame really because you can really write, but I had to give it a 1.
However if the switch needed to be turned off, then it was on. Her hand wasn't caught , it was missing. The ending missed the mark also.
You had me, right up to the end. Even if the story was very contrived, hand stuck in the garbage disposal, it didn't deserve the ending it had. Dumb ass could have at least called 911 to get help in getting her unstuck... then maybe all of the Firemen could take a turn at her and make it totally BS. Sorry but it's a 1 for this one.
I' VE LOOKED AT A LOT OF THE COMMENTS, AND MOST OF US AGREE THE ENDING SUCKS. HE COULD HAVE CLEANED HER UP, AFTER THE FUCKING HE GAVE HER, SAID MOM I CAN'T HELP AND CALLED 911. AS IT SITS, WHEN DAD FINDS OUT , THIS KID IS IN FOR ONE HELL OF AN ASS KICKING. THE STORY IS NOT BAD ,BUT NEXT TIME TRY FOR A BETTER ENDING. AN ALMOST FAN
What an absurd way to end a decent story. He should have gotten her hand unstuck and you could have kept the story going for more good read.
This was a dumb ending!!!!!! After all the nice things he said about his mother, you end it with her stuck and for his dad to find her like that......You are sick!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You really painted a picture of a very stupid young man. The only choice he left his mother with is to tell his father that he came home, saw that she was stuck, attempted to help her and when he failed he just raped her. To cover her own ass, she can tell her husband she is pissed at him for sleeping through her repeated calls for help.
At 18 and still in high school, the kid will find his ass out on the street, losing every advantage he had in coming from what was probably a middle class home. It could not happen to a nicer guy.
The ending sucked big time.
She could say that she was doing dishes when a strange man she couldn't see or identify, being stuck, and was raped. Then, after the rape not during, their extremely drunk and incoherent son came home and obviously wasn't able to help in that current state. Just sayin.
Jodi West seems to be using a lot of literotica stories for her Xvideos.
The ending sucked indeed.. Now there's no possibility for a nice sequel either or imagination.. Leaving your mom dripping with your cum out of her pussy is stupid as fuck, if he helped her he could've fucked her daily.. pffrt.
The title of this story has no comparison to the content and context of the tale; there is no comparison of Andy the son "helping" his mother Jessica. If anyting at all, the son--after drunkeningly getting his sotted rocks off--used, abused, discarded and purposely left his mother in a heightened state of sexual need and orgasms, dejected and leaving her alone in the dark!! His actions are not of anyone "...turly appreciating her body...", after using her as if she were a soiled pair of panties wrapped around his masturating dick!!
This at first, reminded me a lot of another story. The guy is drunk, but I cut him no slack. Where exactly is the help? Helping her into a beating and /or divorce?
This story is a word for word account of this video:
http://www.momson.info/2013/10/son-rubbed-his-cock-on-his-mom-ass.html
Does anyone know who the chick is in the video? She is amazing!
Oh, that ending! Fancy leaving his mother stuck by her wrist in the plug-hole and just going off to bed, its silly, and nonsensical. Otherwise, I loved it. Well done.
He won't be living there tomorrow.
worst ending ever!
you watch to much porn.....search boy helps stuck aunt you'll find the same story
This boy in deep shit. Ya don't fuck a woman & leave her stranded. In real life, Momma woulda slapped the shit out of that dumb azz!
This one wasn't up to your normal standard.
Until the end you had a nice story going from your fingertips. Then you left mom still caught in the sink. That was sick - for that you got a one star. Terrible ending!
And you know what I have never read such a crappy story ever. A woman with one hand stuck in the sink while she gets raped....hmm. Got to say the author is a loser that needs to be castrated, flogged and set on fire. You don't treat women like that...and to let her be like that to see what happens when the father come homes. I can imagine. "Son...did you rape your mother? "uh..uh...uh..yeah..so?" "Well son.....I'm going to teach you a lesson....give me your hand..give me your hand!!" Stick it in the blender now!!!!" Ok...now turn it on....Yeah..I said turn it on now!!!"
Son...that was fun...right? Yeah..I thought so...Ok...now drop your pants....your mom wants to teach you a lesson too...but I'm not sure that you will like it.....but hey...rapists deserve no pity."
You blew the ending with the son betraying his mother like that you should slap your self for that shit
If you are going to do a rape story, then you certainly need to remain consistent. Having the mother go from no don't to oh yea Fuck me does not work. There should have been a more reluctant transformation. And like others have said, if you turned her by giving her an orgasm and she forgave him, at least you should have freed her. You should do better.
Theres a porn scene based on this story. Just google "moms hand stuck in the sink xxx". I saw that scene before reading this story and i decided i should let everyone know that there is a porn scene based on this. I dont remember the actress's name but she wears some kind of a jeans jacket with a dark pink shirt inside, as far as i can recall. Readers, do check out the video too. Its a pretty popular scene.
Now what Andy should have done in this story is to phone his black teenage friend & let his black friend have Jessica's hot tight wet married snatch as well - you can bet the black kid would have fucked & shot his young black seed deep inside Jessica's tight married body more than once (probably about eight times I think !) - nothing better than a young black cock for a married white cunt - delicious.
Thanks for a very erotic & kinky story - beautiful.
Sarah Leather, London England.
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basically a rape story, then cruelty??? Why?
Like the story hope Andy pumped enough sperm into his mothers cunt and got her pregnant.i know i fucked my mom when i was young got her pregnant not just once but three times.still to this day i enjoy fucking her she just turned age 65.got her to go to swing club watch her get gangbanged by group of black guys that are hung.they make her cum.then they unload in her cunt and ass fucking her bareback.Sarah read your comment you said about Andys mom.sounds like you have lot of black cock stuck up in your cunt ass too.you should write about your experience.
https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=ph57c054db8c7c9
This is to Sarah when I fucked my mom bareback let load of my cum in her cunt. She screamed out loud she been my sperm bank and for the back guys that is all she let's fuck her. I know one thing you should let me fuck your cunt bareback get you pregnant. I even got my aunt and sister pregnant
The son may be borderline sociopathic, but i am not qualified to judge.
He definitely is an egotistic asshole. That's why you ruined it for me: along the storyline i identified with him, but the eding rudely interrupted my fantasy.
OK!!!!!!! NOW HERE MOMS GOT TWO PROBLEMS,
THE SINK IS PLUGGED, AND SHE WAS JUST PLUGGED.
BUT IS ANDY CUMMING BACK, THAT IS THE QUESTION.
NICE READ, WELL DONE.
...THANKS...
Let me explain why I gave it a four which is much better than most commenters. First, it is generally believable that mom could get stuck, and that the son would find her and take advantage of the situation, and that she would enjoy it very much. I’m ignoring the issues with the oil and why didn’t take off her bracelet. But yes, she could get it caught on the inside of the rubber seal and not easily get it out. I’ve also known assholes who would have done exactly as him and walked away at the end thinking only about the moment and not the potential of lots of future use of mom’s pussy and body now that they both know she loves it and came multiple times. I have a theory that many - maybe most - women who like sex would enjoy such a situation once their pussy was played with even just a little. While I do wish the author had made the son a kinder, wiser person who would help mom out of the predicament and help clean her up, I also can appreciate that he likely wanted a really different ending to unfold: one we would not have expected. Sometimes even the good guy in the white hat does in the end despite how much the audience liked him. If every movie and story ended the same think how bored we would be. That’s why Hitchcock was so famous.
You blew it with this one. Finding an "opportunity" then making both of them enjoy it is one thing. Leaving her in a trapped position and showing that she had been RAPED is another. POOR............
Wow, well, there’s something seriously wrong with this kid. He shut the lights even? Leaving her stuck, panicked, wet, disheveled and alone…in the dark. The sex was probably something they could have worked with or around, but his relationship-shattering treatment of her afterwards is not something they’ll get through. How will she even look at that boy in any favorable light from that day on?
I wasn’t worried about the dad finding her. She has a free hand, and the water still works in the sink. She can wipe/wash herself well enough to eliminate evidence of the semen, and she can use her foot to pick up her underwear from the floor. She’ll get unstuck, but she’ll have lost her trust in her son and her pride in being his mother. Sad.
Nice story right up til the end. That was crap. A very big dislike. Give this story a alternative end and I'll give a 5 star rating but this ending sucks big time sorry to say.
there isn't a 'switch against the back wall under the sink' and it would be dangerous as shit to flip it, even if there was, with his mom's hand stuck in the garbase disposal. There would, however, be a place to unplug it from an outlet, the only safe beginning to this, other than finding the right break. Never mind he's an asshole that could cuck his own father, and a total fucking piece of shit, for that horrible ending.
There CAN be a switch, especially if the wiring runs through the cabinet wall to say the dishwasher junction box. Good little tale, thanks.
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