by X-Factor
I liked it, but found it somewhat disappointing that with five guys in the room she wasn't fucked by two at the same time at some stage.
Tes real nice and I know just how she felt after fucking and sucking that many men. It's a wonderful feeling. Also I know that she would be know as slut of the town as I was and still am at 75.
a real team effort would have been to have more than one guy fuck her at the same time, don't u think? and the *slurp slurp*, *cough cough*, *moan moan* stuff is a little childish. but still, well done, it was pretty hot.
This was a good effort....the other comments mention missing the "double entry" but I found myself pleasantly surprised it wasn't there...that would have been fairly predictable. I think you have a really good start here but this reads to me like the first draft...refining it a bit would make for better reading. All in all though, I enjoyed it! I would like to see the "sound effects" actually written as dialogue; it becomes a bit distracting and repetitious.
Hot story, and I'm also thankful it did NOT contain any double penetration. That's rather a turnoff for me, same for anal...
I am so envious! fucked by 7 guys in their prime! Great story, very hot!!
Wow! Too bad most videos aren't this hot! Can you imagine this in a video?