All Comments on 'Slut of the Party Ch. 3'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Gret, but...

I liked it, but found it somewhat disappointing that with five guys in the room she wasn't fucked by two at the same time at some stage.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Really special

Tes real nice and I know just how she felt after fucking and sucking that many men. It's a wonderful feeling. Also I know that she would be know as slut of the town as I was and still am at 75.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
hmmm...

a real team effort would have been to have more than one guy fuck her at the same time, don't u think? and the *slurp slurp*, *cough cough*, *moan moan* stuff is a little childish. but still, well done, it was pretty hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Enjoyable...

This was a good effort....the other comments mention missing the "double entry" but I found myself pleasantly surprised it wasn't there...that would have been fairly predictable. I think you have a really good start here but this reads to me like the first draft...refining it a bit would make for better reading. All in all though, I enjoyed it! I would like to see the "sound effects" actually written as dialogue; it becomes a bit distracting and repetitious.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
great

Hot story, and I'm also thankful it did NOT contain any double penetration. That's rather a turnoff for me, same for anal...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
oh yea!

I am so envious! fucked by 7 guys in their prime! Great story, very hot!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Wow! Too bad most videos aren't this hot! Can you imagine this in a video?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hawt

This wad super slutty

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Another great Erin series

More about the wonderful & irrepressible Erin!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Erin is amazing! We need more of her!

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