All Comments on 'The Nurse'

nice, but please get some body to proof read it. Gasp without the "p" makes a very funny mistake.

Well done, great theme, nicely written. A few typo's, but not bad!

Oh, so that was a typo! I got a tiny bit confused when she suddenly farted and then the story moved on. xD Very very sexy though. It featured my favorite type of roleplay ;)

Your typos were hilarious!

"She reached up and pressed her beasts around my cock."

"She let out a loud gas as I entered her."

Was that a queef or a fart?