All Comments on 'Never Have I Ever'

Very good opening.You might to describe what they look like.Now that they are no longer virgins,are they going to do the responsible thing and use birth control?Better yet do they get caught up in the heat of the moment and have to worry for the next month or do they have a expanding family?So many different ways you can spin this story.Paint us a picture with your words so we can feel like we are there with you when you wrote the story.Had my dick hard through out.

hawwtttt!!! you got me all hot and bothered!!! very good story, both erotic and romantic.... there's something very very erotic about teen love....

i dont have an account on lit, but if i did, i'd give it a full 5 stars....

This captured the moment exactly....from shyness, to fear, to intense desire.

well written, fun account of a beautiful first time!

This happens a lot. Many friends have similar feelings but neither will make the first move. An excellent job. Keep writing

Very well written. You took me back to my youth...and, that's a long way!

Thanks for the sensitivity in a very moving story.

Cute story! Hope to read more from you in the future!

and softly into the ear of an older man through this story. Well done. really well done.

Thank you

Haha! And I will never be able to play this game again. I LOVED THIS STORY!

Gosh I felt like I was right there with them - how lovely!!

That was great.

Elle x

Dunno what else to say.. ;-)

enough said!

I've been an avid reader of literotica for a while, and this story is definately one of the most romantic yet erotic out of all I've read. This story has truly inspired me to write about my first time with my best friend. It wasn't when either of us lost our virginities, but it was the first time together, and the first time either of us made love instead of meaninglessly fucking.

Perfect!!!!!

A very nice and loving story that I enjoyed reading. 5 stars!

very romantic ... Very erotic story ... It was amazing ... 5 stars

Many have said it already, but I feel the need to as well. I don't have an account here, but I've been reading stories on Lit for years. I literally cannot think of a single story that was as romantic or erotic as this. I'm usually a grammar nazi, as well, but I definitely missed any mistakes you had. You also did a fantastic job on the dialogue and writing in general. Phenomenal job!

This is the first story of your's that I have read, but rest assured it will not be the last. It was so well written that I felt like I was there, hovering above them and observing the events as they unfolded. That is a sign of a great author - that their readers take ownership of the story, and its characters. It was a beautiful story, beautifully written, by a brilliant and beautiful soul. Keep writing - you have Real Talent.

Great story

This story is so familiar to another story I read on Wattpad. The story on this sight is called "I Love You, Best Friend". Maybe... Plagiarism...

Often stories are similar but this story was published on 08/10/2011 but the others all seem to have been written in 2014. An excellent story and worth a 5 star.

'First time stories' can be v. difficult to write, I suspect.

But your story is so appealing - your characters are sweet without being cheesy, and their cammaraderie is also endearing.

I always remember my first love (my 'Andrew') with great tenderness. But your story infused magic into my subj. memories. Thank you for a wonderful experience, you are a beautiful and sensitive writer ! Pitty that you stopped writing.

to her friend Margaret.

Welcome back SmallTownPrincess I hope you will be submitting many more.

Very detailed. I especially love the gradual build up; from petty experimentation, to foreplay and then that sex scene... Very convincing, right up to the climax. For the first time I was able to visualise what a girl must feel right before and during orgasm.

Very well done.

Nothing artificial...all sincerity! Thanks!

Well done! It brought me back to my own first time at 15– and that was 50 years ago. Thank you for bringing back some beautiful memories.

(7/15/2021)

A very nice read. Thank you for submitting the sexy and sweet first-time story. 5 stars.