All Comments on 'The Note'

excellent 1

But surely a 5, not a 1 ;-)

Well done. Class not course

"You can imagine his surprise - when he saw his own eyes"

There's supposed to be a young child in the back seat. "The one little thing" her husband couldn't give her was a baby.

A bit dark, in that there was no hope of the "happy ending". But nicely written; I liked it.

I guessed wrong at first. Until I started reading I was hopeful that the story would be "Chevy Van" by Sammy Johns. I liked the story. Keep writing.

Nice twist.

Well written, nicely paced and a hell of a good ride. All that and she was nice enough to free him for the happy ending he can now create.

Thank you!

Just the right number of words and adult ending and sentiment. Well done.

Sweet. Nice twist at the end. Wow!!!

5-stars & Favorite

Ohhh, poignant.

Thanks for sharing.