All Comments on 'Across the Tracks Ch. 12'

I enjoyed the fact that JB had something worth giving in this segment of the story. I think being a young councilor with a perspective that younger people can relate to would be so helpful in rough Neighborhood. The chapter was very short and not much happened except what was noted above.

Is Ariel ever going to tell Otis that she was the girl from the fire?

That question aside, this story is great. I'm looking forward to the other takes on the story from the other characters perspectives! And Ch. 13. I am hoping that you take your time and write it well, as well as allow it to have a reasonable length. But am also hoping that we wont have to wait long.

Great series! I'll keep on reading if you keep 'em coming!

Lovin' this man! Keep on posting :D

you have a true gift and it would be a shame to see you not finish this. Besides I want to know if ariel ever comes clean and if danny ever gets what he deserves.

In all the stories here, this was without doubt the best I have read. I loved the end. I have one of those chips with a number 3 on it. Thank you.