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by Anonymous08/11/11

Congrats

Congratulations your most erotic and unique story by far and it easily earned 5 stars. Keep this mind chameleon working and have him body and mind fuck some additional engaged or married beauties. Naive lovlies not porn stars or hookers make the most appealing characters in this genre. Thanks.

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by PoissonSurLaLune08/11/11

A Good Master PC Story

I'm not really a fan of the whole Master PC idea because it makes the idea of mind control too easy. For me the hot part of an MC story is the feeling of gradual surrender, slowly slipping in and losing yourself.

That said, this was about as good a Master PC story as I can imagine. The concept was interesting and erotic, the transformation not too rushed and the narrator had a distinct (if often annoying) voice. My one real complaint with it is how simple and declarative it is, which made it hard for me to really "feel" the story, but I guess that goes with the territory.

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