All Comments on 'Esperanza Ch. 02'

Excellent. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Can't wait to read more!!!

loving this story, I like how she is having a hard time just letting go, great job

That was too short!!! Please update soon.

Finally!! I've been waiting for this chapter I am intrigues by the fact that it's her best friends father & the age gap; I'm loving it!!!

Hope it's not another seven months wait for the next chapter!

I just read these two chapters and I can't wait for the next!!! The last posting was in August. PLEASE UPDATE!!!

Love this story !!!! Can' t wait till you finish it!!! You have me hanging!!!!

lol please add more soon!!!!

Pls finish this, you are off to a great start!!!!

I hope you finish this story.

Where's the rest???

please finish, im on edge, its so freakin good

Please finish the story, literotica should not allow stories to be submitted if they are not completed! Great story though

There should be completed stories posted to avoid years of waiting and wondering if the story you like is a whole story or just a flipping tease.

Very sexy. Plz don't wait too long. You keep us too much waiting. At least tell us if you're working on it or planning on updating it any time soon.

I'm currently finishing the sequel to one of my other stories, but I haven't forgotten about Esperanza. The next chapter will be submitted to Literotica very soon.

This story is so good; please finish it.

Then there are the one page flash stories! Never did like them but still waiting for anything to happen! Looks to me like you've given up for good. Not good for an Author.