All Comments on 'Natalie's Revenge'

That's a very nice story there. Short and sweet. I liked it a lot. Well done!

Hopefully you do a chapter two with a father-son tag team

and when its a payback, its better. TK U MLJ LV NV

This story however... this story is always good for a quick "read." Thanks for the good stories.

Thanks for the constructive, helpful criticism :)