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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
First person storys are a problem

Out of 3,350 words,33 were 'we' 63 were 'I ', and 337 'you' for a total of 433 such pronouns; 13% of all the words you wrote.

The story is lost in the tiresome verbiage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

ignore the loser

1WiseSage1WiseSageover 6 years ago
What?!? Garbage!

"You may do anything you want to her but no fucking..."

What absolute nonsense!! Infantile, pre-pubescent mentality!! Not one adult would have come to this "party"!!! A complete waste of time.

Hell, if I had been there, not only would your wife had gotten fucked, I would have had you gang-raped for being such an idiot...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great! I like it!

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I regret that I don't publish my stories more often. I really enjoy writing because I know, thanks to your feedback, that people like reading my stories. My stories are also a way of living (or reliving) my fantasies.