All Comments on 'Last Night in Vegas Ch. 01'

The man in this story was fake, he was only into girls who were also fake and he was a dick.

LOL, I must be the only one to get that it’s a satire. Sounds like something Brett Easton Ellis would write for the fun of it. If you don’t like the main character, that’s because you’re not supposed to; the author was intentionally casting a mirror onto contemporary culture. I’ve been to Vegas and the strip is crawling with Jakes.

Don’t let the cretins get you down, I enjoyed this mock-erotica.

LOL I really enjoyed this one. Like I always say. " Treat A Lady like a lady and a whore like a whore...

Hilarious! Looking forward to chapter 2!

very good writing keep it up!