All Comments on 'Realizing the Truth Ch. 01'

i cant wait for more

Waiting.....for more....please.

I love the story line, and the character brief, although brief, are adequate. You have a few gramatical errors and wrong words here and there but nothing that you couldn't fix with a little proofreading. I write a lot of stories but don't post them here. The one I did post I worked over three times before posting. Good luck with the story, and keep writing.

please write more

I recognize these characters!

I'd love to know where from since they're based on me, S.J., and a few of my friends. So please, message me and enlighten me.