All Comments on 'Rah Rah’s Prom Night'

There are plenty of words and phrases to describe that act already. Don't make up your own.

EDITOR NEEDED.

I really enjoyed the description of how you felt and all the pressures for and against. Well described. As for "de virginised" well in intense situations the English language sometimes breaks down and I think it is OK to invent words sometimes.

A very nice story, with a fair amount of detail and nice descriptions and dialogue. I would suggest you turn off anonymous comments, since all they ever say is how much better it would be if they had written it. If you don't already, I would suggest you read your story out loud to yourself and hear how it aounds!

I do that at least four times with everything I write!

very nice story indeed......

You was my daugther i divorce my wife and marry you slut

well done

deflower is the word you were looking for.