All Comments on 'Now I'm Their Slave'

by GeminiMoon66

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
That's it?

Why bother publishing if you're just going to write a post card?

ballznall60ballznall60over 12 years ago
This could become interesting..

..unless the site thinks you're into bestiality.

GeminiMoon66GeminiMoon66over 12 years agoAuthor
Would really appreciate more comments!!

I'd love to hear more comments on this part of my story from all of you!

I am working on more of it now and hope to submit another part in the next day or two! I hope you'll keep an eye out for it, it will be titled "Now I'm Their Slave Part 2"

Thanks to all of you for reading and voting!

GeminiMoon66©

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
INTERESTED

Please continue with this.

You have me hooked :]

amislaafamislaafover 12 years ago
MORE

please write more very interested in what will happen between you and your new master/mistress and even the dog's!!! write and tell me more if you wish....amislaaf@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
DUMB

Get a life loser

shavedman39shavedman39over 12 years ago
Good so far

I am looking forward to a part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
amazing story

please continue, i love this story, hope the dogs will mount him too :)

GeminiMoon66GeminiMoon66over 12 years agoAuthor
Part 2 has been submitted today!

Now I'm Their Slave Part 2 was submitted today and hopefully will be published in a few days!

Part 2 is over 4500 words compared to the 1100 or 1200 words of the first part.

I'm glad that some of you enjoyed this one and hope you like the second part even more!

GeminiMoon66©

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I can not wait to read more! Please do continue this story.

TrstxxxTrstxxxalmost 2 years ago

A wonderful start. Excited to read the 2nd part.

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