by rampant404
An illustrated story that is actually illustrated! Nice and spicy too.
I LOVED IT! HOW ABOUT SOME COLORS ON THE NEXT ONE TO MAKE IT EASIER ON THE EYES:)GREAT STORY LINE AND VERY LOVELY DRAWINGS . NEVER BEEN SO TURNED ON BY A COMIC STRIP BEFORE!HEHE!
What a pleasant surprise to see an erotic comic strip style submitted. It was well done and I'm sure will rise to the top among other submittals. Maybe Literotica will start a new catagory for this type of entry, hopefully. It was reminicent of the Tiuana Bibles popular long ago (and still popular, I would think). Looking forward to seeing more submittals from you in this style. Don't disappoint.
Wonderful first submission. Needless to say more would be nice.
even though BBW are not my cup of tea this was an amazing illustrated story a real piece of art you have taken this catagory to a whole new level deff a 5* even tho not my cuppa more please
Great Crumb like illustrations. Looking forward to your next submission.
Jerry in Washington State, USA - I was very disappointed when I first checked out the "Illustrated" stories and discovered they were not the type of illustrated stories I wanted. What I wanted was stories like you just shared with us, the readers. I have enjoyed porn comics for many years and enjoyed your story and art. I hope you will be able to share future stories such as this. Thanks for putting the "illustrated" back into Literotica's "illustrated" section.
This is more like what an illustrated story should look like. This needs to be shown to all the people who can't draw posting to the illustrations section.
I also thought the whole scene where Manoa leans against the sex harrasment poster was hilarious.
This is one of the most creative and artistic submissions Literotica has ever had. Why it's not receving a better rating is beyond me. Please keep it up.
Very good job. Comic is quality and story is too. Manoa is a great realistic character. Keep up fine work you have so much potential
It would be great if you could write a story in which Manoa seduces someone with her sexy big legs!
Absolutely brilliant!!! Luscious illustrations!!!Complementing a darn good read!!!
I read part 2 first (missed Part 1 somehow). But this is great. Story teller and artist. Now a favorite author.
ohhh... how a chica learn a hawaiian pidgen word, that was cute.and hauole boys are yumm.
Honestly I get a samoan vibe out of the series. I'm latino myself and dated a somoan woman before and it's more suited to that culture