All Comments on 'Tentacle Touches'

by arachnevelodona

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Corpse_riderCorpse_riderover 12 years ago
Ausgezeichnet

Wilkommen!

Wie gehts, baby?

A good opening part to a tentacle tale, intriguing, arousing, sensuous. A promising start.

Perhaps a longer instalment next time?

mvonderahemvonderaheover 12 years ago
Very Good! More and more!

This is very good! Mrs Frizzle WOULD be proud!

arachnevelodonaarachnevelodonaover 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Your feedback is very much appreciated! This is the first story I've submitted and I wasn't sure anyone would even read it. I'm glad you liked it.

I'll work on 'longer installments'. ;)

writedoctorwritedoctorover 12 years ago
Intense!

Very well written! Loved the eroticism you have created. Please continue...please. Gasp, moan

SwitchWitchSwitchWitchover 12 years ago
Interesting...

How about prequel, like how she came to discover this?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wonderful

There are many times when I displace my sexuality to some none human life form in my fantasies too, and an Octopus seems like a great fantasy lover!

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