All Comments on 'Kidnapped and Raped'

Omg, I loved reading this, it got me SO WET, I was finger fucking myself while reading ;) My only gripe would be that it should've been a bit longer and there could've been a bit more resistance from the female character. Other than that, a great read! <3

Clearly, from a male reader's perspective this doesn't really work. Nonetheless a well written story. Interesting to see what comments female readers give this.

Very well done short story.

Oh Sir, how could You tell everyone what You did to me that night?

grins

You know i love it!!

huggs

suzanne

Wow now that isa great trip to the mall mmmmmmmmm all she needed was fpr him to give her a ride back to her car thats all i woid need after that hapening to me so very ho. Im going to the mall on sat.

I just has the strongest orgasm ever! I'm sending this story to my lover. We WILL be doing this!

Seriously?

Wow just wow!! Great job!!

I came three times. Love this.

this made me cum alot

That was good. Making the reader be the person in the story :)

i liked this one however i think a little oral on his part would have made it a little hotter and perhaps less cursing if shes enjoying it from first person he needs to seem slightly desirable and if every second word out of his mouth is bitch and slut it takes away from the good feeling its supposed to cause the audience other than that it was hot and a good read i enjoyed it

Loved every bit of it, but would have liked to hear how (I) got home, etc..

This is sick, you write about this in fantasy, but this is life for some people and it isn't some "erotica" it is miserable. Fuck you.

I don't like that fact that its "me" in the story rather than someone else. 2 stars.

Loved the fact that we get tk be the main character. Very erotic story and great work

If someone doesn't like non-consent/reluctance/ rape stories, they shouldn't read them. I think you did an excellent job capturing both the sensations and emotions. If you're getting raped, you're not going to be attracted to your rapist, and he's going to humiliate you with harsh words. I love it. Perfect ending, too

I liked it but I would like to hear about how she got home

Its really hot and good writing but my problem with this is its about rape which disgusts me and is a turn off cancelling out the hot of the story

It had potential but got disgustingly ruined

It should have been a different setting and relationship. Then it may have been good.

1 star

This was so hot.

Loved hearing the victim's account about what it felt like to be taken against her will and how her resistance was overcome and she got shagged.

That sounds so hot. Love the rape orgasm idea and the humiliation of the climax.

I was fucked red raw by 3 guys like this, my cunt leaked cum for 2 days. fantastic cant wait to be taken again.EECE

I enjoyed it until he just left her in the woods. Ruined the whole story -- really depressing that she wasn't taken home and was just left to cry.

Yeah it's a rape story. Did you expect him to bring chocolates? I think leaving her in the woods adds a thought I hadn't contemplated in a rape scene, how they are after you leave them. I mean now she has to walk home with that torn up shirt and no panies. Great story great words. For some reason the word "womanhood" got me. Good job

Should’ve been cuffed and whipped also dude

I love that it is written as if the reader is the woman. Also the ending isn't some tender "he took her home and tucked her in" which seems to be extremely overdone in stories like this. This is just all very well written, good job

The girl should've been raped when she gets a ride back.

This was very well written, I love the POV of this story you did an excellent job! Thanks for sharing.

Nipples don't get hard when aroused just so you know. Otherwise great story

nothing that i like would be better in these rape stories if every writer would not make believe that the woman starts to enjoy it this is only what the guy wish would happen it aint so

interesting take it seems to play into some world of consent ... ?

rape is violent and unforgiving it is animal lust and disregard for the target.

Its a violation of the everyday politeness and its pain fear and threat , skin and sweat and fluids

It is no-no-no from the moment it begins for the target and yes yes yes for the attacker

take time to think about how powerful the emotions for both must be for this to transpire.

if you are writing this to appeal to the darker sexual side of people . you must get guttural

get primal and have no fear to feel the screams and the tearing. if it is a tale of combating against an

inescapable conclusion then you have to express the loss for the victim and the ferocious anger of the attacker

feel the dirt on the ground under her nails and the merciless anger being inflicted

on violence is erotic to millions of people but you can't whitewash it.

Hot

not bad at least there was no anal in it, would have been better if she had swallowed all his cum not wasted it on a facial and there had been more detail as his knob slid into her mouth but not bad.

Rather cliche but very well written.