All Comments on 'Crutches'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Well, now . . .

This is a terrific story. After reading your bio, I understand how you came to its premise, and I really like it. I'll read the rest of them soon.

Would it be too much to ask that you expand the actual sex parts? Here he was suddenly in virgin, nothing about the encounter of cock and pussy. It would be more erotic (you don't necessarily have to be especially graphic).

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

The sex was hot and the character interaction was cute. Please write more!

:3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice!

Loved how he never said her name...he probably doesn't have any idea who she is!

Barkley570Barkley570over 10 years ago
So GREAT

I didn't particularly like how he treated her, but the humor and fun and sexiness - all were wonderful and made me want to hurry and read the rest of the chapters.

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker

Don't bother writing any more

zammzammover 8 years ago
A+

Loved it. Sent you feedback and hope that you receive it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
How could she ride cowgirl with a bung ankle?

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KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 3 years ago

MORE, please.

YOU have MY serious attention!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it. Now that's a great story that keeps the reader involved. It seemed you never knew what was "coming" next. Thanks for sharing it with us.

irvingsmusingsirvingsmusingsover 2 years ago

Loved your story! Very imaginative. A novel and interesting setting, and realistic characters and dialog.

Sman4444Sman4444over 1 year ago

I miss those college dreams like this one that unfortunately we’re only dreams too, from the guy’s perspective that is. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I enjoyed this but thought it was a bit rushed. Good writing, though!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Jen & Jason story order:

1. Crutches

2. Booty Call

3. Ride Home

4. One Night Two Parties

5. The Morning After

6. Agreement

7. Payback is a Bitch

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