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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/28/11

Well, now . . .

This is a terrific story. After reading your bio, I understand how you came to its premise, and I really like it. I'll read the rest of them soon.

Would it be too much to ask that you expand the actual sex parts? Here he was suddenly in virgin, nothing about the encounter of cock and pussy. It would be more erotic (you don't necessarily have to be especially graphic).

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by Anonymous08/30/11

The sex was hot and the character interaction was cute. Please write more!

:3

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by Anonymous02/12/13

Nice!

Loved how he never said her name...he probably doesn't have any idea who she is!

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by Barkley57009/02/13

So GREAT

I didn't particularly like how he treated her, but the humor and fun and sexiness - all were wonderful and made me want to hurry and read the rest of the chapters.
Thank you

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by Anonymous04/24/14

Total fucking rubbish by A Wanker

Don't bother writing any more

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