All Comments on 'Let Me, Daddy'

with the names changed to protect fictional characters/ TK U MLJ LV NV

...if your voice is half as vibrant as your writing.You've got first person and dialogue down maybe do a third person which would complement your ability to turn a descriptive believable phrase. thanks for writing.

Free flowing, wonderful topic. Very erotic. Loved every word.

shoudl be able to give more than 5 stars....you are very descriptive and can make a dead man cum....more soon please

AWESOME

Beautiful.

Amazing!!!!!!!

Thank you

Great story great flow, it's cute and sexy and dangerous. I think you hit a nice balance of erotica and taboo

I wish I could hear that read Its practically a script!

It is a good story, but it plays like a little girls fantasy dream instead of "Daddy's 19 year old whore's" sexual encounter with her Daddy. I think "Daddy" may be slightly over used in the context of her describing what is happening to her and what she is doing to her Daddy, because her Daddy is there he is experiencing it too. If the story is an actual experience I feel it should be told to the audience from that point of view, not as if it is going on in her mind. If she is "Daddy's 19 year old whore" working to please, him begging him, I think we should hear from Daddy telling his whore what she can and can't do, what he wants her to do for him. In other words a little context goes a long way, either before or after, let the reader in on it or let Daddy participate in the story. Overall though good story. Thanks for listening.

Good use of erotic terms and descriptive details.

This was adorable, sweet and lovely! Thank you...

Gave it a 5. Loved it.

WTF was this garbage