All Comments on 'Chloe and Mathew's First Night'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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Please continue this! I loved it! You're writing was well, but the pacing was a bit fast for my taste. keep it up! :)

MatedMatedover 12 years agoAuthor
thanks

I'm glad some people like my first story ever. Right now I am working on a chapter two, I hope to make it better than this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent

Very good story, keep the characters in character. Looking forward to CH2. Thank you

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