All Comments on 'The Shrine'

As always great job! Your character's are always interesting and your stories always have a great build up. Thanks for your time and effort.

The mother's torment upon discovery of her son's shrine was compelling reading. The way that her torment ended was novel and very moving.

What a great read!

Ahabscribe has proven, once again, his superior talent for storytelling.

5/5

Well presented, and a great buildup, and great ending. Keep on writing, and we look forward to your next story.

I loved it, very well done, super tension and nice ending. I had to 'take care of business' because of this story! Keep writing, you have a gift!!!

Beautiful story! I've enjoyed reading it a lot. The concept that gives title to the story seems quite original, and how it worked out into the story was very effective. I wonder when you'll decide to post another epic mom/son story with lots of build up and your characteristic writing style. I'll be looking forward to that, but I 'll certainly welcome anything you threw our way, as long as it's the high quality stuff you use to spoil us with. All in all, thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. 5 stars! ^__^

What a GREAT story. As the story developed I felt a freindship with both the mother and son. Great writing! More, more, more...

You are ... without a doubt ... a master!!

You're going to fucking kill us man! Great fucking story, wow is all I can think of to say. You are one of the best!!

Its a terrific story of discovery into the world of sex where love knows no boundrys and to be caught in a relationship of mother and son, very powerful story that really comes alive as you read. Beautiful and full of passion and a world of discovery.

You captured the feelings of many men. Very revealing and insightful. Many women can learn from this story

This is a story that conveys all the love that can happen between a mother and son. You are one of the best. I hope there is a part two.

Awesome seems doesn't seem good enough to describe your story, but it's the first thing I though of after reading it. LA Wicker (good author as well) is correct, you simply are the best here on Literotica. If they had a separate category for Incest Romance (or the best of incest) it would be filled with all of your stories. Incest Romance is my favorite and all because of your stories. This unworthy one gives you his humblest thank you for your incredible story.

Loved it.

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Great story, would like to see a brother sister story next, keep up the great work

On a personal level I prefer it when the moms struggle against the sons' advances but are overcome by both their beloved enemies' strength and their hidden desires. What is undeniably awesome is how A. finds innovative wrinkles to make one think that's utterly fantastic and yet keep the story within the fringes of plausibility.

I always but always admire the sumptuousness of description of his resident milfs both on the aesthetic and inner level . He notes how time does make its mark- yet shows us how trivial that is with a woman of 'real beauty'. Thank you and five stars for the story.

P.S. in terms of this story it was satisfying you took the time and gave the shiftless stepfather wannabe preacher his just desserts . Respect!

I truly enjoyed the story!

Again and again, you display a deep understanding of the Oedipal/Jocasta fetish. I can't believe you referenced the old Pete Hamill novel, Flesh and Blood! Now that proves your Oedipal education is extensive! I also appreciated the salute to the old adult paperbacks with mother/son incest themes. Thanks also for remembering Kay Parker and Honey Wilder. But you did not mention Colleen Brennan, who was à great incest mom in à bad Taboo sequel. Juliet Anderson and Cyndi Summers were porn stars from the Golden Age who took their own turns as incestuous moms, though not in the Taboo series.

You do seem to have spiritual issues with lusting after mom since you bring spirituality in a number of stories. Don't if you can or should go any farther than you have already. The major religions are pretty much on record that fucking one's own mother into orgasmic delerium is, well, wrong, even if the thought makes a fellow hard in a split second. I don't disagree with the majority consensus there. However, despite the taboo or maybe because of it, we can indulge the fantasy that there could be no greater pleasure than sex with mom.

If they ever want to build àn Oedipal theme park, you'd make make à great advisor.

Greetings from Oedipal Fantasyland!

A well written and edited story that is smooth reading, and has a happy ending. Every thing a good story should be.

Very enjoyable to read.

Thanks for the fine story

Fantastic Job. This is how a story should be, You did a Fantastic job of actually setting up the story and all of the emotions within. Not just straight to the fuck. Very good. I Look forward to a possible sequel, or maybe even a story about the Artist and his aunt?

One of the very best of it's type, you're a real master at this work, quite brilliant. I can't praise this enough, it's just superb, all the right ingredients to make an unforgettable story - well done! Ken

Another excellent tale - a good original idea, as usual with all of the trademark features that make an Ahabscribe story so enjoyable to read. The emotional intensity and the erotic descriptions are always well balanced and an absolute pleasure to read. Well done, yet again! 5/5

The description of Mom's reaction to finding the shrine was as gripping as a Poe short story or a Hitchcock movie. It is so refreshing to find material on this site which is Literature first and Pornography second. Many thanks, Ahabscribe!

You are by far the best writer on this site.

Your stories are always better.

BRING ON MORE.

wow the hottest mother son ive ever read

You are one of the best writers around and have honed your skills to the point where we, your loyal readers, can't wait for your next story. I've read everything you've written and will continue to do so.

ahab mean something new and something between mother son. cheers. you are the one who always take care about his fan specially the mom son incest fan. well story, but something i want to tell you that you should include some anal sex some pervertness and more nudity of mom. moms nudity is very important for a mother son story. about myself i have a few experience about my mother(48). we bath together in bathroom on my birthday but not she nude, she was in her silver color bra panty (what a body of her). she was refuse at first because she is mother, i said "this is a birthday gift of adulthood" then she agree. but she was in her bra panty and keep some distence from me. i touched her panty covered buttock in chance, she act some anger to my behave and my bulge but she understand that its not a falt. she is a very attractive and have a god gifted body.

your stories just get better and better

I really like your style of writing. Very good at portraiting the women's psyche. However, in this story, I feel the religious comments are not quite necessary. May Be you have a disliking of certain churches and religions and this is a way for you to voice it but from an erotic story point of view, it is not quite necessary.

I also think the fantasy scenes is one too many. I dont think we need the mum's one in details. I know you need to show that she is aroused by the fantasy so that she would pursue it in real life but I feel it could be done in brief. Overall it's very good and I wish they have 4 and half stars but they dont, so I wont vote as I dont want to drag it down for you.

This is (without a doubt) the hottest mother/son incest story that I have ever read. Your stories continue to get better and better Ahab. Keep up the good work!

Beautiful story. I absolutely love the, well, LOVE stories between mother and sons and this one is about as perfect as you can get with that theme.

Your writing never ceases to blow me away, Sir Scribe. You paint such beautiful imagery to perfection and I can never, ever get enough of your work. Keep it up!

My first time making a comment. Loved the story and writing. Would love to see it as a movie. Can't wait to read more of your works

I couldn't stop reading and yes , I could easily envision it played out as a movie in my head. I cant wait to find and read more, pls continue.

Your writing shows your usual high quality.

I look forward to more of your great works.

ED

One of the best and well written stories of love between a mother and son I have ever read. Thank you and keep writing.

This is one of the best I've read on Lit. Really outstanding. You said yourself, "Even the most devout Christian could be aroused by well done pornography". Now I'm not devout, but this is arousing in a way that few other stories are. Hot, well written and a developed story from beginning to end. Writing of this quality would stand up in any genre. Many thanks fro a first class read.

This is a beautiful story from beginning to end and captures so truly the tremendous feelings of love that a young man can have for his mother. I would never have dreamed of such a shrine as you describe, and yet it rings so true--if I had thought of it and had the means to do so, I would have created such a shrine. For the feeling that I had also felt so honestly holy, totally sacred. I knew that if my mother had given herself to me, she would not have been a slut, but a wonderfully loving and pure mother.

The way you gave the mother in the story the time to recover from her severe shock at the explicit photos and descriptions of incestuous relations was very well done. The turmoil and conflicts within her as she grapples with the contrasts of sinful fears and loving passion are eloquently described, with the love and pride and even gratitude that her son's devotion has aroused finally triumphing. And yes, I do sincerely believe that a loving God, who is not fettered by rigid taboos, would wholly approve of the completely mutual love in their most admirable and satisfying relationship. For above all, this is not a tale of perversion and lust, but a magnificent story of a true and enviable love.

i never had a chance to love my mother , she had to much love for her self. your made every clear to us . we are who our mother make us. good work , keep up your writting

I so enjoyed reading this super 5***** story. I think you can tell that it came from one thought, it flows beautifully. Very high standard of work. You have captured an essence that is almost tangible and... to cap it all, I love happy endings.

Fucking own mother is really shrine, everyone should fuck his mother and make her his wife...very good story

Of all the stories I read this is the only one where the mother wrestles with the moral and even religious questions of incest instead of just seducing or throwing themselves for sexual satisfaction. This story was a gift to you and you wrote is beautifully. One observation though, the meatloaf would have more than 'somewhat' burned.

love love loved it

Ahabscribe, you are one of my favorite writers on Literotica. This story is the reason why. You developed a believable plotline that was easy to follow, a picturesque scenery, and equally believable characters. You also went boldly where no other author could possibly go without going overboard, and that was touching the religious question. There is a spiritual connotation in sex which should be acknowledged, and you did it with grace and dignity. What would absolutely top this story to the point where I'd cream in my panties is one measure that would transfer this story to the Illustration category. We need a picture, and I mean someone draws the scene exactly described in the second to last paragraph....THAT would set this story off!!!

Now that is more like the Ahabscribe we all know and admire.

Anonymous because it is a lot more honest than a made up name & address.

you cant get any better then your writing,,, with mom at xmas now this story, u r super,,,

keep up the great wriiting

Left the reading of this story actually feeling the love between these two. Great job!

My hearts still pounding!

5 out of 5 stars. I loved the story very much.

This is my first ever comment and all I can say is the best piece of work I have ever read in all of my 54 years of life. Absolutely Amazing and it leaves me speechless to say any more here other than you are a true talent and should be proud of your work.

Reddevl141

5 points - for 'unshaven pussy' Mommy ..

Reduced points - uneven level and unnecessary extension of the text..

5 points - for way to solve moral dilemmas (except the same moral dilemmas - the weakest spot in the text) Mom - and as a result, the total acceptance of a new personality - practically without any inhibitions and false prudery.

Summa summarum - full 5 points

P. S. Please note, that each exaggeration is a way to grotesque.

Like for the son in this story, for lots and lots of boys their mother's cunt is indeed a shrine, a shrine where they solemnly worship as often as they can with their hard young cock. When it comes to his mother, a boy looks on what he's got jutting out between his legs as a sacred implement, whose function is to penetrate the holy mystery of his own mother's twat, and he thinks of the creamy sperm filling his young balls as the sacrament to bless the miraculous hole he came out of. When a boy enters his mother's cunt with his fat young prick and shoots his mother every last drop of semen in his balls, the angels sing.

fap...fap...fap...

I decided to reread this story after reading the last comment and I'm glad I did. I forgot just how smoking hot this story was. As to Cassie's big tits, I say the bigger the better.

I loved it and wished I could give lots more stars than they allow. Keep up the great work that you put into each story

truly one of the best stories . now that is how fantasy should be.

Not the wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am of so many stories, but one incorporating people we all likely know and their lenghty but inevitable joining. Two elements I especially liked involved the putdown of her idiot husband - I know people like him and detest them - and the discovery that her son was a virgin until her.

As usual, you have set a very high standard for the rest of us who try to write erotica.

I can't imagine him getting much work done for a while.

Thinking about biblical issues, the garden of eden comes to mind. Eve was part of Adam. There were no other families for their sons and daughters to marry. even the next generation it would have been brothers, sisters, and cousins. Not till the next generation would the options move past 1st cousins. Still leaving brothers, sisters, aunts, uncles, 1st and 2nd cousins. and of course moms and dads. Maybe that is why they lived so long?

Thank you very much. It had a true feeling of love in all its discourses. Thank You.

It had just enough build up to it to make it sound like it was true in real life and not just a fantasy about incest like so many other stories are the only problem I can see is that the build up only came from the mother instead of both the mother and son all and all it was a well written story I give it 4 stars could have been 5 if not for what I just said keep writing you have a talent for making it seem like it really happened in real life

The shrine that comes to mind is the magical, nearly mystical, hole between a mother's legs. It's the shrine a son worships at, with his nimble fingers, his loving lips and tongue, and--most of all--with the magical wand between his own legs. It's the shrine that draws a boy like nothing else ever can, it's his origin, the start of his whole life-story. To him it's the most beautiful anything in the whole world. His own mother's vagina.

each story i read is it like i am the son each time

THIS is what I like to see, the love between the two of them and only them is just absolutely riveting! To think that he's waited his whole life just for her is remarkable! Please don't mar it by them allowing others to desecrate the sanctity of their relationship. Mike and the aunt have their own story. Let it stay as such.

I'm so glad I revisited your page and this story!!

Thank you for sharing your talent!!

IzzieD

Your stories are great and your attention to fine detail is unsurpassed. I always enjoy reading your works.

BUT why not get the moms pregnant???

The only thing missing is a baby...

I love that Mom has a full thick bush. It makes it so much more realistic, and the fact that the son wants her that way.

But for the future, when expressing passion, it is "groan", not "grown". But their passion did "grow", didn't it.? 😏

This is one of the most realistic depictions and is perfectly paced. There was just enough sex present to lead into the ending. So few stories seem to focus on the 'mommy' aspect and just settle for "it's wrong but it's hot". That, a mother's love, and the love between her and her child is to me the most important thing and rarely seen like this, I think.

There were a few typos, but nothing systemic. My only complaint is that there was no pregnancy stuff, but that's small potatoes. I'll be returning to this one many times.

I just finished reading this story again. It is even better than the last time, which was better than the previous time! Thank you for this great story.

I've read it a few times. I wish the author would have made her younger and able to have kids. That would have been perfect...

MOTHER and SON at there best , mom flies from fla. to illin. To find her true love......MUST READ ........THANKS

I truly loved this story of incestuous love. I had a 9 yr incest love with my Aunt. She was 10 yrs older than me. I would love to tell the story but I was underage for 90% of the time our love bound us together. God I loved that woman!! She was my first love and I still love her today even though I am 72 now. I remember like it was yesterday. Sadie died in 1970 after the family received the news that I was wounded in Viet Nam. She was distressed and went into town and got drunk. She was hit by a drunk driver and killed instantly. I got married a few years later and lived 44 yrs with a very loving wife until she died from the big "C" but I always thought of my sweet Aunt Sadie all through my married years. This story and many other incest stories always bring me back to my first and my strongest love of all. Thank you for a very powerful and loving story. I will dream deeply and have wonderful thoughts tonight.

An epitome of devotion and love, "The Shrine" actually feels like a shrine and has to be hallowed...

Thou I will not leave my name here I do what to let you know that I truely enjoy all your stories here Thankyou

Gyönyörű történet és remélem személyes élmény alapján íródott. Gratulálok.

This is probably the most tender incestuous love story I have ever read. The emotional and sexual epiphany experienced by both mother and son was beautifully depicted. The son's long devotion to his mother was believable. Psychologically, emotionally and mentally some people know what they want an will not settle for less. The son knew that no girl could match his mother based on her experience, trust, and arousal that she offer in a sexual relationship. Only his mother would love him unconditionally and limitlessly. 5 star story.

Marvelous story...icing on cake would have been impregnation.