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Barebacking the Babysitter

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by txcoatl197009/06/11

Nice fantasy

I like the candor about striking out when dating. Single parenthood isn't for wimps. The story made for an enjoyable read but I have a bone to pick with Allison as a fuck doll programmed from the first sentence of the story to fuck our hero stupid.
You told us why directly in the story, that she really admired how he focuses on his daughters' needs first. Cool. She has mad respect for a loving, responsible guy. We have a motive as to why Allison wants to get it on with our hero.

Means, well, she dildoes herself to a porno of an older guy and younger woman boning, just like she wants to do with our hero so the thick sod can see what's on the menu and her unambiguous green light to do so at long last, especially after striking out with "appropriate" playmates.
Awkward, hesitant kids of all ages resort to zany, elaborate schemes when they can't just say to their prospective playmate, "I've wanted us to fuck for years and it's long past time we did."
That happens IRL, so I won't say it's unlikely.
She got the opportunity when he struck out. OK, time to put on the sex show when he gets home. He's needy and greedy and ripe to fall into my lap.

Still, I'm a little puzzled as to why Allison's so fixated on this guy when she's an attractive young woman with other options and who knows what else going on in her life. You mention she went to college but not what she does when not babysitting. She's "worried" about her reputation which is very quaint to modern US ears. It implies a close-knit village or neighborhood where everyone knows everybody and few leave.

Also, the bareback boning is a little disingenuous. This guy's an experienced player who no doubt wants no further complications in his already busy life. Is Allie looking to get knocked up and get married via fait accompli? She planned the sexual ambush.

You certainly did your job as an author making it fun to read and getting readers like me asking for more.

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by peebudy09/06/11

good help is hard to find!

I love babysitter stories and your did not disappoint! well done.

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by mikej72809/06/11

hot babysittier

I don't hve any babies, but I would love to fuck a hot babysitter, your story was good, keep it up

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by Anonymous09/06/11

Hot hot hot

Absolutely fucking wonderful, I would just love to fuck and suck this lush baby sitter

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by Anonymous09/06/11

A college babysitter? Seriously?

She couldn't get a job anywhere else paying better money than babysitting? Whatever. Boring as watching paint dry.

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by Anonymous09/07/11

to the "a college babysitter seriously" commentator

she didn't take the job for the money you idiot, she took it for the 'benefits'.

some people haven't got a f'n clue sheesh

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by Corpse_rider09/07/11

Broken in babysitter

A good straightforward babysitter story.
An enjoyable quick read.

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by Anonymous09/08/11

Ass

No wonder you are Irish....

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by HeyAll09/12/11

hot story

I enjoyed it. The ending was a nice touch. Your other first time story with the biologist losing her virginity is also hot.

thanks

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by Anonymous09/24/11

This Stinks

It's completely unrealistic - nothing like this would ever happen and there was no build up of suspense whatsoever. It was awful.

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by Anonymous11/04/11

Nice

Could have been longer, but I liked how it was short and to the point. Easy to picture happening too.

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by Anonymous08/14/14

not bad

Not a bad story

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