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He's Dreamy

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by Anonymous

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Be Gentle

It's my first time sharing anything like this.

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by zpitt2709/12/11

Great visuals

I would love to read more of your poetry if you have any more to share. There are some great visuals present and it got my mind racing.

Great job!

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by DrawnToLife09/26/11

Cute, and Beautiful! :)

Hey there. :)
I was interested in this one poem the minute I saw the title. I think you did a great job conveying both how he makes you feel, and your feelings for him, in a sentimental way at times too, that is truly touching to me as a woman.
It reminds you not only of good sex, but someone you truly love and want to love in every sense of the word! *l*
I listened to one of your audios - that really WAS for the proverbial "friend" !! (*LOL*) - to test-drive. (I know no one cares, but I'm straight, so it *was* a little bit of a stretch for me...but funny thing about the audio - how the _heck_ did you know what I was wearing???! *LOL*, *blush* & etc. j/k ;-)
I think you have a really postive and gentle attitude toward sex, which I think people need today, and there's a lot of brightness in your outlook that I think is important today, too.
True though, that I'm only judging all this from one audio and poem..but..hey;-)
Don't want to sound ridiculous, but when we're _in_ love there is always an element of the ethereal and the beyond - the cloud nine you mentioned - and at the first, the way you set the scene, describing his embrace? It DID sound like a modern Song of Solomon for a few lines - to me ;-)
..That's meant as a compliment, btw, don't worry!! *l* So yeah, as the various ratings suggest, stay true to yourself and keep writing as long as life inspires you happily, and as long as writing serves to make _you_ happy! :)

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by AlixK06/25/12

Very sensual, Angel. I especially liked your use of alliteration ;-)

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by cheezwhizz29506/26/13

keep up the great work

Thank you!

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