by fun_tracy
Please find an editor, the challenges shown throughout with basic spelling, grammar and punctuation make it impossible to read, follow, and/or enjoy this story.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i enjoyed stroking my cock and cumming to your story, keep it up and you'll keep my dick up
Nice scenario....nicely described. Certainly got ME going. I agree an editor would be a good thing but it was more than readable. No need to get harsh.
Glad i found you Tracy x
Very sexy and nothing beats a good sized cock! x