All Comments on 'Chloe and Mathew's First Night Ch. 02'

really loved it! You're progression was a little fast but i cant wait for more :)

You won't have to worry, all the chapters ahead will be longer. I was cutting stuff out but after getting some feed back I now know my stories are currently considered short. I'm very curious what people like about my stories, if anyone would like they can send a message with what they liked about it. That way I could get to know what the audience is expecting of me.

The ex-boyfriend picking on the current one Is a tired theme. If you can handle it without a rape, it will be a better story. Good luck.