All Comments on 'State of Mind- Lost Girl'

by Maria2394

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KobaKobaover 12 years ago

A wonderful piece! Very well constructed. I think you put a bit of time and effort into this and it shows! Perhaps the girl is not as lost as she sometimes thinks she is. Well done!

NeonuroticNeonuroticover 12 years ago
Gorgeous

If I could pick out an image that this poem reminds me of it would be a dandelion seed floating and spinning, but eventually planting. Your poems are not flimsy, hun. They're always lovely reading whatever mood you are in; including this one.

fridayamfridayamover 12 years ago
This is wonderful

What a kite of a poem, flowing freely from one thought to the next and all within one encompassing idea: a poem. A delight from a real poetess.

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