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by Anonymous

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by Arielu09/16/11

More please

I have. Thing for tall Asian guys. Nice to hear these type of stories.

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by Anonymous09/16/11

Good start and I can't wait to read ch. 2

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by Anonymous09/16/11

more more

that was good cant wait to read more from u

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by bredre09/16/11

Fantastic

Love it. Please update soon

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by Anonymous09/16/11

Good start

Good start.. You could use a proof reader.

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by pinksnapper09/16/11

feedback.

Continue. Thanks ; )

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by Anonymous09/17/11

yay!!

go korea!!

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by Anonymous09/17/11

Meh,

Boring! And in need of some major proof-reading, with many sentences like "I quickly raised his head and looked at his father." Is this story in first person or third person?

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by Nightpleasure10/05/11

lets see where this is going

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by jeff_d11/09/11

To the ones who are bored…

…it's called development. Try reading Pynchon. Or Eco. This guy isn't in the same class, yet, but effort counts. A copy editor would indeed be helpful.

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by Anonymous04/01/12

it sounded like the friends snuck onto a plane and landed in the states without a passport or going thru customs. post 9-11 that would land all of them in prison and or sent back to korea in cuffs.

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by Imoto_chick03/01/13

Please Please Please

continue!!!! Dont stop writing, this was a really good start and I cant wait to read more!!!!!

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