by Giveandgetoral
i enjoyed it, great character development, would love to see another chapter.
i want to seduce him just like in your story. I know once he's had me he would be mine forever. He steals my panties so I know he's into me already. i already tease him and know its just a matter of time before he losses it and takes me just like here. im stacy and would love you to email me at stacy18_bi@hotmail.com
For a short story that was just excellent. I would love to read a similar mother and son version of this. That would be so hot to read. Hope you consider it.
This i great story & has room for mor echapters,,, where is tha affair going from there
It's nice to see a story that is not just the usual "Wam, Bam, thank you Ma'am. Slow, gentle teasting and exploring.
Really enjoyed it.
Damn. That was incredibly hot. I gotta say, the mom was a bitch but thank God she was or this woulda never happened. To Stacey below that sounds hot and I think you should make a Literotica and post it on here once you do seduce him. I agree it was nice to see something besides the 'hot, heavy, sex and that's all she wrote'. You should make this into more than a short story. Make more chapters so we can know what happens next for them! By the way, name is Alex and this gave me a hard on.
Great story! I liked that it was a loving, caring relationship with mutual respect. Very hot!
cheri8
totally mind blowing .. dude loved it .. this is the best story i have read in this site .. good work keep it up ..
That was a great hot story. I hope to read more like that. That really got me hard.
Great story, very heartwarming, if your going to make love to your daughter that's the way it should be done with love and gentleness.
THIS WAS GEAT I LOVED IT KEEP IT UP..........................''R''..............................
Hi, lucky man,
Is this real or only a fiction. I had a girl who was like you ex. She never liked me to to stuck her nipples, or her pussy. Every time making love with her was just like doing a routine work. Go straight into her tight pussy and shoot a load in it, ya, she had a very tight and neat pussy. I did not leave her because of this tight pussy. But, now I decide to leave her alone.
I hope could have a brilliant experience like you.
LG
How could a guy hold out for so long with a horny teen in bed with him playing with him?
This should be the rule, not the exception . I was disappointed only once in this story and that was at the end. Thank you and i hope you take this past the 2nd chapter one day.
our storie was like this storie.me&my daughter sleep in the same bed now.i found out something about her.my daughter can really squirt.she likes 69.she squirts all over my face.she yells&moans doing it.we really love each other.
The core concept is good, but the story lacks depth, both in character and concept. More details about father and daughter's lives, histories, experiences, hopes, goals, relationships, and emotional connection would lift this tale from a quick jerk to a true story. There is a fine basis here. Develop a strong and emotionally affecting narrative.
Love this story. It did the job ;)
I don’t want to marry the characters, just enjoy them, so this story hits the right spot. Keep up the to the point stories.