All Comments on '345 Clementine Street'

Did you decide on "Erotic Horror" as the category? I guess I'll find out why next chapter...Rick

No luckier man could have stumbled upon such an intriguing predicament . Landlady final statement seals his fate into her web.

This was a story i wrote for a competition whereby, the story had to be written in a short period- I love the idea of darkly mysterious women who lead double lives. I may return to this one at some point!

wish there was more ...........

this start is so very erotic and mysterious

cant wait till you continue with it

Dear Sputnik57

Wonderful story and the Erotic Horror leaves so much to write about.

Love the way she gets him to confess his love for mature Dominant Women.

Hope you will come back to it soon and give us more insight of his submission under such a Lady.

Joanne Pare.

...this was originally written as a one off short, but so many people have asked for continuation; I might just revisit!

Thanks for the encouragement !

You must continue. It hardens us submissives. I know she is as cruel and dominant as Blanche and all your other creations. More, please! Let us wallow in pain and humiliation, please....

You have to do another 38 chapters at least.

Very erotic beginning- good character development- hoping for more

Very good,but far too short.

Great start to the story. Hopefully you write more so I can enjoy being her slave