All Comments on 'Summer Solstice Ch. 02'

As a writer and someone who has had many broken hearts, this was very sad to read. It was erotica, but ironically enough, I don't read the stories on here for that. It was beautifully written and I think you truly have a gift. Continue to write your stories and share that gift with the world, because no matter people's reactions, you can't go wrong. Fantastic as always.

S.J.

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Most stories I've read here have the fantasy happy ending, while this one has a bit more realistic ending..I couldn't keep my eyes off the entire time. The ending made me cry as it hit me right at home...this story was amazing.

Would love to see what happens next

Beautifully written and emotionally engaging. I can't wait to read what happens next. Please don't make us wait.

Beautifully written!! Love the way you drew the reader in. You had me emotionaly invested! Can't wait to read more from this author!!

I don't want to read about someone else's suckie circumsatances. Katie's mom sucks. Please please give me a happy ending... please.

btw, I'm really loving this storyline.

more please more ! need to know what happens next.

I want to hear more about this couple. Please don't stop here.

Well written. You have the gift. I look forward to reading your new stories. Thanks for getting to my emotions.

This part if the story had me in tears. It's the same way with me and my best friend but I never made love to her. I love her but she doesn't feel the same way. I still hope one day her feelings for me will blossom.

I can't go to bed until I read the next chapter. Please tell me they finally get together!!! I am really enjoying your story.

That was heart breaking, gut wrenching and such a tear jerker. You are one talented writer. Thanks for sharing.

How can she be so weak?!

Tell her parents that if they can't accept her happiness with the person she loves that she disowns THEM!

OK... I cried... you happy now

So good and so sad.

Damn it. Is someone cutting onions? Beautiful.

11 years pull the heart strings