All Comments on 'Accident Grants Benefit Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What a story, tenderly stroking my sensitive spots

A heart rending (fairy?)tale of friendship and committing, honesty and trust. You gave me back hope that life can be good.

A romantic tale, written with love for fine details and a great sense of humor the story is touching, and if you keep the high standard you will hit a home, what a debut!

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wonderful Story

Good job. It's nice to read a story that has that much very realistic love and excitement in it. The detailed depiction makes it even better.

Thanks, and remember to continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A wonderful, romantic story

Hey, femadorer,

this is one fingering, romantic story, just as I like them, and I can't wait for the next chapters.

Good effort - great for a newcomer.

If this is a true story like you affirmed, you've certainly been blessed, thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Writing style is kinda hard to follow. Feels like it is missing transitions and was written with a lot of omitted details. It's a OK setup, but the difficulty in getting into the story is a bit of a turnoff.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great

Great job. You are the very best writer here!

Sparkles in my eyes and a big smile LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL

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