All Comments on 'Gonna Sell The Bitch's Car'

just a looking for no 1 nite stands. TK U MLJ LV NV

So far, so good . The author has quirky ,off hand but unforced way of telling his story. I kind of wanted a little fast food groupie grind story to keep me going till the featured attraction ( his future ex-wife) plays . Maybe next time.

when it is multiple chapters..Many of us don't like to start a series until they are all posted.

Thanks, I liked it.

tom anon

You have a nice, relaxed writing style with a good sense of humor thrown in. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Always fun to read about the wild eyed southern boys. Will three steps be needed to get closer to the door? Will life turn out to be green grass and high tides? Will he sing I used to love her but it's all over now?

I liked it. Anxiously awaiting more.

Thank you.

Good start. I generally give 5 stars or nothing.

At times this story was more like a tonal poem in communicating the aura of a band playing in a bar. Extraordinarily well written with a self confidence in the writing style that was pure pleasure to read. Can't wait!

Now where is the rest of the story?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

It read well, no glaring errors, and it a good set up piece.

Essentially, this was a mere introduction to all the characters with a foreshadowing of coming difficulties.

Thank you for writing.

Good narrative lined with interesting details and insights.

Thanks

fucking page? And no chapter one disclaimer? Well, eff u dude, u're on your own here, I ain't comin' back 'cause u're rippin' me off here, fucker.

No vote.

Really good start, looking forward to future chapters. The bit about doing Mike first tonight was great.

Great opening to a story. One of the best cliff-hanger endings I have ever seen.

My Anonymous cousin's vitriolic comments embarrass me. I apologize for all those Anonymouses out there who think longer and wider is always better. This is a great stand-alone/setup story, Dude. I'm gonna go read Ch 2 and expect to lmao, then check out your other stories. Keep 'em coming; you've got an easily enjoyable way with words.

FOF (Friendly Old Fart) who thought he'd seen everything, then moved to Texas. :-)

Your story is building nicely. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you and please keep writing!

Nice start.

in a rock-n-roll band. I'm a lover with a stranger fan. TK U MLJ LV NV

Heard that song done by Big Mike Griffin some years ago in Texas. Loved it. Not a bad story either.

I continued to the end. And I fucking love it. and I know there's another 3 chapters at least and and and thanks..5*

that sang "cool guitars (sell the bitch's car)"?

and a massage therapist I really identify with this tale.

Will told and well written, I enjoyed it. The memories it evoked were both steamy and comfortable. I married one of the waitresses...

Now on to chapter 02.

Chuckle - ROTFLMAO!!!!

Great intro.

Thx!

Fun stuff - the massage is such a good ice breaker IF you know what you are doing - LOL

Her Pink Cadillac CAUSE Her Fiance is Gonna Take His Tang" Away. TK U MLJ LV NV

about what is to come.

Haven't read this series yet, but i do love the author. Looking forward to this one.

Ed Grocott

edgrocott@gmail.com

You've got style and I cannot wait to see where you take this - though I'm slightly worried that your story telling is going to break my heart right along with Wiley's :/

J

I know I've read this before, but I can't remember much, don't want to peek ahead!

...Chick magnet?? If you are bragging about it, you aren't. It's a rule I've never seen broken.

... I just love (A) how playful and fun the little scenes are told. For me, together with (B) a decent editing this just tips the scale, overall, to the better than average side.

Otherwise (C) the foreboding hints of darker things to come and (D) the narrator resp. hero's self aggrandizement (the inner voice endlessly talking about how he is doing just everything 'oh so carful' and perfect) would have been too much to enjoy.

Do not get me wrong, these are just my 2cents as a reader how I felt about this chapter 1. Never ever, could I do better in writing fiction. Therefore, I (1) do not try to, (2) do admire all those that do and (3) am grateful for every decent effort shared here for free. Even if most are somewhat rough and non-perfect (is that an English word? Not sure), overall, many of them are considerably more fun to read than it would be to watch an average mediocre TV show or film.

Thanks and best regards to qhml1

I don't think I've ever read a story that was only one page but still made me want to yell: "Get to the point already!" Between reading about what has to be one of the worst sets a of music I could imagine having to endure, to the vintage guitars, to him quoting the stats of high heels vs tennis shoes; I was beginning to wonder if the story was just going to be a journal of the most boring musician who ever lived.

No wonder 'the bitch' cheats; clearly his car is the only interesting thing about him.

Well, I enjoyed your little ditty. It did all needed to provide a short burst of entertainment.

Nice start to the story, the hooks were nicely set.

Foot massage is a wonderful foreplay!!!

CRAP

I was skeptical at first, glad I hung in there. 5 stars so far. Let's see how this thing turns out.

You have to tell them to save the high heels for the bedroom.

Foot rubs and full body massages enticed a few women to me (as a start). Really good story, reminded me of my younger years. Thanks Q - 5 STARS ( third time through this tale).

somewhere east of Omaha

Fun story!

Can you get me a late 50s left handed Strat, please? :)

good fast paced beginning w/ fun conversations. rk

Fun!

Bill S.

Great opening, really looking forward to more.

An excellent srart to hopefully a great story.

Nice start!

Oh this is good. Really good. I so wish I could have seen the band mates faces when he talked about "doing all of them including Mike" I nearly fell out of my chair laughing so hard. So looking forward to the rest of this series. Thanks BardnotBard

I agree with BardNotBard, laughed my ass off rocking back and forth in my chair clapping my hands. Priceless, and the mental image of that entire exchange made today already better.

The hook was hilarious with the conspiracy between the MC and the waitresses and Mike vs the band.

good and funny

Its a good start, the whole bar part was fun. 5*

Good start

Sammi and Sandy were both toxic bitches