All Comments on 'Your Weekly Massage'

I am not a fan of critical comments on the public boards. I believe criticism should be constructive and offered privately to the author. That much said, I genuinely enjoyed the story, thanks for sharing it.

It was a good story, up until the dream stuff. In my opinion, if you had left that out, pitt at least not actually wrote 'omg', it would've been far more enjoyable.